Charge forth Roscinante!
Added 2023-06-02 11:08:49 +0000 UTCThis is an experiment on writing, I might take this format from time to time to tell stories that I won't have time to draw (Comics take freaking forever)
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I teared up reading this. The second Alessio whispered to himself, "Charge, Roscinante". A ray of sunshine is Lady Flayne.
Emil Guerra
2023-06-06 10:15:05 +0000 UTCAwwwww they are so cute!!! Flayne was always high energy wasn't she lol
CaptZealot .
2023-06-03 03:41:49 +0000 UTCI totally agree, I’d be using this format on some stories definitely, it’s a lot easier on my hands to haha
BasedBinkie
2023-06-03 03:37:27 +0000 UTCI think stories like this, with a lot of internal monologue, work a lot better as Stories rather than comics. If this were a comic, the first two paragraphs, if printed in full, would take almost three pages, and also the shots would be mostly Casian, looking dejected, while lying in bed, or sitting in a chair. Maybe some close-ups of his handcrafted body for emphasis, but really no life. As prose though, it's good! And the pictures you do draw get to be simpler, and more expressive for it.
Domino
2023-06-02 21:48:00 +0000 UTCExcellent writing. I can tell there was a lot of deliberate thought put into the words you chose to use. I also have to note, in several of my own writings I have also named my butler Sebastian. Is that just the first name that comes to everyones mind when they think of a butler?
Ben
2023-06-02 17:10:53 +0000 UTCLove it!!
AxolotlHelmet
2023-06-02 15:31:37 +0000 UTCThis is such a good story, and I think it’s a great idea to make these so as to not have to make only comics. The way you told the story and the characters and world you’ve built, I could honestly see and hear it all. Very well done!
Sierra117
2023-06-02 14:50:50 +0000 UTCOh my goodness, this is amazing. I couldn't stop smiling through it
Tommy French
2023-06-02 14:47:27 +0000 UTCI love these stories!
silvarknite
2023-06-02 14:23:34 +0000 UTCLord Casian discovers a need for speed
2023-06-02 11:57:13 +0000 UTCOh my gosh, I love this so freaking much!! Plus it has cute little pictures to accompany it <3
RedstoneFurnace
2023-06-02 11:16:46 +0000 UTC
