Ultimate Level 1 - Book 6 - Chapter 320a
Added 2024-12-12 15:00:01 +0000 UTC“Tanila?! What’s wrong?!”
Tanila was sobbing, and Batrire held her friend close. The friend she knew was struggling still after all this time, unable to speak after waking everyone up from the screams that had come from her mouth.
Fowl stood there, trying to advert his eyes from the spilled and mangled red hair as Cordellia knelt by the bed, stroking the hand of the one who was royalty.
“Speak to us, princess. Tell us what is wrong.”
Large sobs came, and each breath made Tanila’s whole body shudder. Finally, after a few minutes, she wiped her arm across her nose, not caring about the snot that had run freely and made her look like a beggar on the street.
“Max… I… I felt something… through this…”
She tapped the necklace on her chest, and Batrire’s eyes blinked a few times as she stared at it.
“The one that tells you he is still alive?”
Sniffing while bobbing her head, their mage tried to fix her hair some, pulling the strands everywhere out from in front of her face.
“Yes… as long as it doesn’t break… he’s alive. I… I have been able to keep going because I know he is alive. Each day we fight, and try to grow stronger and defeat the next floor in the tower, I know that he is alive. I can sense it. I can feel it.
“It’s the only thing that gets me out of bed each day. Knowing one day he will return and that I need to be strong enough to be beside him.”
Cordellia scoffed and then grimaced when those irritated green eyes glowered at her.
“I mean, Tanila, you’re stronger than all of us. How can you say that?”
“You don’t know Max. He is far stronger. I can feel it every day somehow. Yet… in my sleep just now…”
She shuddered for a few seconds, squeezing herself tight.
“Something has happened, and it is like a pain I have never felt before. I’m afraid for him—for who he is.”
“As in that he is hurt?” Fowl asked from across the room, taking a few steps toward the trio of women at the bed.
“No,” Tanila replied, forcing a smile as she stared at the dwarf she knew was hurting almost as much as she was. “Not like that… more like his soul was broken.”
“The skill?”
No one said anything for a few seconds after Fowl whispered those words.
“No… it was something else.”
“But he is alive,” Batrire stated. “Surely that means something. Right?”
Another few sniffs came, and Tanila nodded.
“But what if the Max I know and love is gone? What if whatever lives within isn’t the man…”
Tears began to flow, faster this time, and both women grabbed her tighter.
“If he isn’t what man?” Fowl demanded, now at the foot of the bed, squeezing the wood at the end.
“I’m pregnant,” Tanila whispered.
The only sound that came next was their dwarven warrior who had lost his grip and fallen to the stone floor.
Max… don’t give up. Your child and I need you.
Squeezing the necklace with her hand, Tanila willed her desire harder than ever before.
Comments
I mean he doesn’t have the complete artifact but he does have 2 pieces at the moment (and I’m very interested to see what a completed artifact does. Especially with how Bob reacted to it (although it may be due to them not being very strong at the time they found the first piece)
A
2024-12-13 14:11:00 +0000 UTCI love the romance side. Tyvm. Love love love. Yay preggers! Tyftc
Chloe
2024-12-13 03:14:29 +0000 UTCI think the one thing you gotta make sure of is that he doesn't become irredeemable if he goes dark. I look forward to Bob telling him it's time to stop fighting and Bob bringing him back from the ledge.
bcd051
2024-12-13 01:05:43 +0000 UTCYeah, that chapter was corny. I'm not a fan of having Mcs break down over somebody they barely knew, who told them who they were.
Felix Richards
2024-12-12 23:42:11 +0000 UTCToo abrupt of a jump off if you are actually angling for the Anakin-Darth Vader decline into madness. Of course, Anakin’s back story was also not believable because it happened too abruptly. But yeah; “this is likely a trap, we got this, we’ll be ok to wait, what - a secondary character that barely got five thousand words betrayed me now my soul is broken?! “ Doesn’t jive.
Ben
2024-12-12 20:43:29 +0000 UTCI agree and believe Max was storywise effectively soul-bent (not broken mind u) when Romanus the lionkin weapon forger was killed at Aimee’s request. Bit back for us here but that is where in the timeline i would anticipate Talina felt this. Also, i don’t believe Max has yet gotten the uber legendary artifact which was paid for by his daddy Dragon patron. Suspect it will come before Max escapes this tower arc..tho barely. In time to use upon his return and help deal with both Igara and Ezreal tho seems likely. Perhaps still too story early even then tho. Will see 👀
todd bender
2024-12-12 19:51:34 +0000 UTCWOOHOOOOO‼️ 🤰🏽👶🏻👨🍼 There’s a mini-Max or mini-Maxine (or even better, both? Fraternal twins one expressing more elvin, the other expressing more human, both inheriting red skills from Consumption’s line, which both Max and Tanila share would be sweet!). Daddy Max….has some splaining to do in the elven courts upon his return lol. Should prove fun by that time he will stand proud and tall💪🏼for certain, her dad won’t be able to overpower/kill/take whatever he wants from him anymore.
todd bender
2024-12-12 19:29:59 +0000 UTC~holds up martini glass~
Shawn Wilson
2024-12-12 19:25:35 +0000 UTCThis is probably the hardest thing for me to juggle. What is too dark and what isnt? Go too dark - people leave. Don't go dark enough - people leave. Choose the best path for what I wanted for Max and said 'hope they understand why'
Shawn Wilson
2024-12-12 19:25:25 +0000 UTCMore Drama.
Plattmaker
2024-12-12 18:55:55 +0000 UTCWow! Mic drop
Vandal Savage
2024-12-12 17:47:00 +0000 UTCI like the twists but don't think the story will go dark enough in what I think would be a proportional responses.
Naoggeddon
2024-12-12 17:24:01 +0000 UTCI agree with the thought this is going along with the betrayal of Max by Aimee. Though that was a well done twist with the chapter and Tanila
Jacob Goodrich
2024-12-12 15:56:25 +0000 UTCSkills have been adjusted to hosts physiology enough that it must have changed... Or maybe his riduncadunk stats have altered him enough? 🤷♂️
Scott Frederiksen
2024-12-12 15:40:00 +0000 UTCI'm pretty sure it's Aimee
Scott Frederiksen
2024-12-12 15:37:44 +0000 UTCI think this is happening alongside what happens at the end of the last chapter. Think about all that's happened since max was dropped into this world; all the killing and fighting, and now a betrayal of someone who he thought was close. He was expecting something from Igara, not Aimee. He's already strained from what he's had to do in the arenas, and now this. I'm not surprised with his reaction.
Cmndprmpt
2024-12-12 15:25:20 +0000 UTCThats a hecking twist
Dave
2024-12-12 15:23:48 +0000 UTCThat's what I was thinking too. Bob has become more..."Human" in their personality. Empathetic, sympathetic, thoughtful, careful, though in Bob's own special way. It would only make sense if they were to help stabilize Max after this.
Cmndprmpt
2024-12-12 15:22:08 +0000 UTCWell played, Shawn. Well played.
Mario Schade
2024-12-12 15:20:56 +0000 UTCFrom a writer's point of view, it would almost make sense if in the end the transformed skill, Bob, gets Max to refocus on his core after his rage. Max has changed Bob, Bob helps Max not to lose himself.
Mario Schade
2024-12-12 15:19:55 +0000 UTCWait. Wut!
Mark Corwin
2024-12-12 15:16:48 +0000 UTCLife uh... finds a way
Raivix
2024-12-12 15:12:46 +0000 UTCLet’s GOOO! I think max will be ok, what is broken will be repaired. By his bunny friend who will still be there waiting for him when he gets out. In the previous chapter but one, he whispered “friends” to himself or something I think after Max said it to him? And I think it is genuine for bunny butler. THEN! It’ll be Murder Max and Murder Bunny time 🥳
Tommy
2024-12-12 15:12:06 +0000 UTCWhat the hell, now I really need the next chapter...ok several chapters....
Craig Carey
2024-12-12 15:11:24 +0000 UTCSo knowing how these subchapters go, I wonder if this is taking place way earlier (like the subchapter of when the dragon donated power to the tower so that Max could get an artifact….it took place chapters and chapters AFTER Max had gotten it. So is this broken feeling taking place when Max and Bob had each controlled half of himself? (Bob controlled the magic and max controlled his body against the ogre) Or is this current and lined up with the betrayal from Aimee?
A
2024-12-12 15:10:56 +0000 UTCWOW!! TFTC, but what a bomb to drop!!
Jason
2024-12-12 15:08:57 +0000 UTCThey’re not. It’s just gonna be the humanoid version of a black skill and red skill 😂
A
2024-12-12 15:06:29 +0000 UTCWTF SHAWN?!?! YOU CANT JUST DROP THAT ON US LIKE THAT!!!! Holy crap man... Max is gonna... Idk, this is gonna turn everything on its head when he finds out. I almost didn't wanna know this yet, but at the same time I'm glad I do. Jfc man, hopefully Bob is able to keep him from turning I to something he doesn't want to become.
Cmndprmpt
2024-12-12 15:06:19 +0000 UTCTFTC
Travis Smith
2024-12-12 15:05:10 +0000 UTCWell shit. I thought half-elves weren't possible.
Youkai-sama
2024-12-12 15:03:36 +0000 UTCWell … darn
Kevin McKinney
2024-12-12 15:03:06 +0000 UTC