First Chapter Transition Change
Added 2024-12-05 14:08:52 +0000 UTCI did a little playing around and after a few variations went with the one I have now.
Chapter 301
https://www.patreon.com/posts/114389972
Let me know thoughts on this if you're willing (its just the part before *** and Kill Them!)
Chapter 299
https://www.patreon.com/posts/114389976
Just a quick 'recap' that the opponent wasn't strong after Igarra left Max to kill it.
Thanks!
Comments
it comes a little later - really looking forward to the book 7's big skill list ;)
Shawn Wilson
2024-12-06 13:46:19 +0000 UTCnot sold on the 299 changes. Feels a bit forced and choppy to me. I agree original was a bit of an abrupt transition, but think single sentence would be enough. Add βHe wasnβt.β at end of Chpt 298
Jurgen Deagle
2024-12-06 10:11:01 +0000 UTC301 addition great.
Jurgen Deagle
2024-12-06 10:09:26 +0000 UTCI think these additions were perfect. While not a ton of information, it was just enough to keep it from feeling like weβre missing an entire chapter. Although I would like to see the information for the ghost strike skill lol
A
2024-12-05 14:17:40 +0000 UTCThe addition to 301 is chilling. Great stuff! πππ
Tommy
2024-12-05 14:16:40 +0000 UTC
