Fall of the Last Dragon Rider - Chapters 1 - 60
Added 2024-04-13 14:37:04 +0000 UTCForgive me for this!!
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Removed line - Apparently myself and 2 other readers missed that... Your eye for details and catching stuff is amazing! Ty!
Shawn Wilson
2024-04-13 16:07:18 +0000 UTCI dont understand. In chapter 60 Pammon still spaeks about the loss of the first child. "There is no telling how their death might impact me. Having witnessed how it hurt you and Ava when you lost your first one… I’m scared." And in the last chapters were a few sentences similiar. So until your post i assumed these are all the old chapters without edit, because there is still the lost child. I am confused.
Mario Schade
2024-04-13 15:39:15 +0000 UTCAll remaining chapters edited - ends 5/18!
Shawn Wilson
2024-04-13 14:59:01 +0000 UTC
