Finished book 1!
Added 2023-09-03 15:49:26 +0000 UTCHard to believe it but I penned the last words to book 1. Going to send a week going through all 96 chapters (plus epilogue).
After that review / edit, I’ll start writing book 2
Its a weird feeling but in coming week i have a request if you have time and are willing.
1st if you are willing, tell me things you like and dislike so far. I know there is still 40 chapters which covers a ton of ground. If something from early on still is in your mind, making you wonder about something let me know. I would love to make sure im crossing T’s and dotting i’s.
2nd i will probably be dropping a few extra chapters. I know. Most of you dont want extra chapters but too bad.
3rd im working on combing my goblin and dragon books into one patron and making all future books / stories under that same one.
Enjoy your weekend and ty again!
Comments
Like seriously. Everything else is absolutely beautiful. 💯 You've started an epic story here and I hope it continues to be as amazing if not more than book 1
Shotgun_Samura13
2023-09-03 21:22:30 +0000 UTCMy ONLY, and I mean ONLY issue. Is the length of the chapters. Wish they were longer, but not everyone can be PirateAba with the Wandering Inn. Lol. Great everything else though.
Shotgun_Samura13
2023-09-03 21:17:53 +0000 UTCStruggling does not mean everything should go downhill100%. I imagine it more like,, Plan A and B not working (maybe even after we read half a chapter through it) and the way to solution seems uncertain. But the character gets there in the end. Maybe loosing some money, favors, good will.. so you could say it was not perfect.. but not every time someone has to die to be a good scene.
Mario Schade
2023-09-03 16:23:36 +0000 UTCI think just in general he only seems to be coming across people that are happy and pleased with him. Some people should be jealous or dislike him for becoming a silver, even if he deserves it.
Brandon Baier
2023-09-03 16:16:46 +0000 UTCWell.. but it is explained with the Skill and Lifestone (or gaining Skills like Storytelling through his Lifestone). We do not know the truth about that yet, but especially because of these 2 things it should come out better than average. That is the point in the end. Maybe in the future we will see effects against stronger identical SKills ans his story telling not getting the exact result best for him or something like that.
Mario Schade
2023-09-03 16:14:57 +0000 UTCSolid point - struggling with the MC who wins but also experiences loss (ie the loss of Luca and others (later chapters)). Lifestone stuff will hit huge late late but plays a role. If you had to pick a few spots already past to fail, where would you think they work best?
Shawn Wilson
2023-09-03 16:14:40 +0000 UTCMy one critique would be that sometimes it feels a little too righteous. Like he’s consistently making really good choices that have really good outcomes. I am talking outside of the combat. A lot of the stuff with the public speaking and bar. Would maybe feel a little more natural if he was making more mistakes or things weren’t working out as well.
Brandon Baier
2023-09-03 16:07:46 +0000 UTC
