The feeling of rewriting like 75% of Keo's ch 10 romance interaction:
Added 2024-07-31 12:24:02 +0000 UTC
It feels so good. I hated the original so much omg 😂 I had to write it bad before I could write it good, which is my least favorite part of being a writer. I'm almost done with it and it's way more in-character and way less cheesy now, thankfully. I don't know if I'll wind up rewriting it again after beta feedback comes in, but for now I'm at least no longer embarrassed to be seen with it. Can you tell I'm my own harshest critic? 🤣
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I can't wait to share them! The theme of the interaction is the same, but gosh, the execution is miles better. Plus if you choose to keep pursuing the relationship there's a moment I love where Keo's fae nature comes out to play for a second ^.^
SailingShellsGames
2024-07-31 14:14:22 +0000 UTCI'm excited to see what changes you made!
Marlyena1
2024-07-31 13:28:41 +0000 UTC
