Batson 2 - Ch. 3: Deeper
Added 2023-10-12 19:38:49 +0000 UTCI took the changes slower than originally planned and turned this into more of a psychological erotic thriller. I hope you guys enjoy.
Going to try to get something out for Halloween before I pick this back up. I started working on it when I was having trouble with writing. It's been really hard for me to not fall into repetition with my creations, but I hope this feels new enough to enjoy.
Halloween thing won't be anything deep or developed, just a fun thing between these more involved story chapters. I'm still struggling to figure out a good way to release bits and pieces, it's really hard because I look at a block of 20-30 pages and it feels like it doesn't have any sort of payoff. So IDK what to do, but I'll keep on creating so long as you guys want it.
You can read the full thing in my Standard Folder or by downloading the attached PDF files.
Cheers and thank you for your support.
<3 Kara
Comments
try megaupload too
Stormfries
2023-12-01 17:31:10 +0000 UTCTHAT just before my birthday thank you! Kara!!
Stormfries
2023-10-13 16:06:54 +0000 UTCI'm really liking how this is going!
Maynardless
2023-10-12 23:42:02 +0000 UTCThank you. I went through a bunch of different things before I settled on the ones I have. I'm glad you liked it.
KaraComet
2023-10-12 21:36:41 +0000 UTCI love the fluid dynamics you’ve added, make her constantly drip! 💧
Bianca
2023-10-12 20:32:54 +0000 UTCGreat, I like this type of story, especially for a revenge tale. What is the point of changing someone to such a degree that they don't remember the heinous acts they've committed, in this case slavery and murder. In my opinion, by taking it to that point you've created a new person that is arguably innocent the crimes for which they're being punished. At what point do you stop carrying out justice and become another villain? Oh, and of course, the BIG boobies!
Ken Dahl
2023-10-12 20:22:30 +0000 UTC
