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[New Comic] Witchy Ex-Girlfriend: Part Two

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Thank you for your patience while I got this out, as well as your understanding. I hope the wait was worth it.

I'm REALLY trying not to make this a larger series, to wrap it up in one more part, but I can't make any promises. You guys know how little self control I have with these things, but I'll try not to make it carry on TOO far. It's just so hard to let go of my pretty girls, I'm really liking how Corey turned out, and I feel like there's a little more to explore here.

But we'll come back to it after I catch up with some other stories.

In the meantime you can read the full thing here or by downloading the attached PDF files.

I hope you enjoy. I'll return with a Fates & Fantasies update soonish.

Cheers!
- Kara

[New Comic] Witchy Ex-Girlfriend: Part Two [New Comic] Witchy Ex-Girlfriend: Part Two

Comments

Loved it!

findesiecle

Exactly! Part of me would love to see her accepting her fate, and maybe having to get a job at a strip club, and he picks her up from working... tons of ideas

Kayla Kocklove

You could always have the kids off camera so to speak... if you went that far ahead for a coda or something.

Larry Talbot

Ditto!

Fox Face

I'm familiar with the story, I'd like to see at the end what happens a few years down the line! Has Corey accepted her fate?

Kayla Kocklove

I just reread both chapters together, and yea… this is the apex, haha. As mentioned above I would love to see a few more chapters. Also would love to see an epilogue for Roommate From Hell. Would love to see where our friend from That Evil Bitch Christine wound up, too, heh.

Jhf

Fantastic! You never disappoint, Kara!

Pete Parker

Ha, I guess you kind of are writing self-fanfiction! Still, I think it's worked very well. And again, it's hard to write characters who are awful jerks but still human, and thus sympathetic and capable of change. I think you've struck a good balance with Corey here - for instance, he does seem to genuinely care a lot for Dave. Just, aha, a lot more physically now than he is used to.

Fox Face

Wow...I wouldn't be disappointed with this going a few more rounds!

Steve

Incredible. Corey looks perfect. Love every sexy panel

DJ

Love this. So good.

Amazing kara amazing today looking

Stormfries

My style has changed a lot since I began writing in 2013. I've gained a lot more investment in my characters, especially since I see them visually now. Definitely changes how I see them. So I'm glad you feel it's translating well to a comic format. Because I'm basically writing fanfiction of my own stories from ages ago. Lol

KaraComet

I think this is your best work yet Kara. Love the expansions you've made from the story, and Cori's look is perfect. You've done a great job, I think, of making Corey a bad enough person that we can enjoy his fate, but not so bad that we don't sympathise with him a bit. Who knows? Perhaps his new life will make him a better person! Very keen to see the flash forward in the next part - also excited you feel there is more to explore here.

Fox Face

I’d love to see another chapter ❤️

Jhf

Looks like ol' Corry got a nose ring and navel piercing as punishment from buzzing her hair off, or Dave thinking about them as new little add-on's? Great addition to the story itself, and the new piercings too!

Larry Talbot


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