Hot Shit High Ch 2, Page 8
Added 2018-10-12 22:44:14 +0000 UTCAlright! A little bit of delay in getting this page up due to some time off but we're back on track. Here's the second page of Sharlene's shower fun.
My favorite part of this page was trying to get the dream sequence for Sharlene's memories right. I considered drawing the imagery from scratch, but decided it would be better if I used some asset art from Chapter 1 as it would better invoke the feeling of memories. I was able to get them to look hazy and faded by using an inverted screen tone layer and blending the underlying tones together. Next, we'll be catching up with you know who...
Comments
Could this be the start of Sharlene falling for Marvin? If so, she'll do whatever it takes to be his girl.
Stone Quillian III
2018-10-26 21:00:33 +0000 UTCI'm pretty wowed by this page too. Sharlene's wet hair makes her look almost like another girl. In a very good way. Somehow her masturbating fingers, on the spread, convey a delicate touch. Actually, I like the entire hand. The position of the hand does a pretty good job subtly reinforcing the illusion of Sharlene's thigh, tummy, and pelvis being three dimensional. Actually, maybe that is why I like it so much. The foreshortening is nice, but somehow I find the other techniques you used more interesting. And of course, the picture was very erotic.
Buzzkill
2018-10-16 07:27:08 +0000 UTCI think A LOT about panel placement, and how to best tell the story sequentially. A story isn't told just because there are words and art, it's how you place it together that helps convey feeling, emotion, and ultimately a sense of time and space. It's pacing, really - but it's also much more than that. I'm glad you're picking up on my efforts though. Today's stream is actually going to be about this topic specifically, Hope to see ya there!
Erotibot
2018-10-14 19:39:52 +0000 UTCOh Good Lord, this page, man. First of all that Sharlene angle is just a snare in and of itself, which helps the eye flow down the page from her thoughts (amazingly positioned near her head) and further down to the climax panels. Panels because things lead right into a physical burst of emotion with her hitting that wall! Whew~ Great work as usual, Erotibot! Also, let me take a moment to highlight the appreciation of the little movement effects you add in. Subtle but excellent touches. How are you not looking at this page and doing that kissing the fingertips gesture that chefs do the whole time? :O
Tahldon
2018-10-14 19:07:45 +0000 UTCyeah he does. but I didn't see mob psycho before I started this xD
Erotibot
2018-10-13 18:51:08 +0000 UTCnah
Erotibot
2018-10-13 18:50:13 +0000 UTCyep
Erotibot
2018-10-13 18:50:03 +0000 UTCSame
A-T
2018-10-13 04:20:01 +0000 UTCFan of hair down Sharlene <3
ZeroskieS
2018-10-13 01:59:04 +0000 UTCOh man things are about to prick up.
A-T
2018-10-13 01:18:00 +0000 UTCDude kinda looks like Mob from Mob Psycho lol
Maginpui
2018-10-12 23:28:11 +0000 UTCSpud??
grilleddog
2018-10-12 22:58:25 +0000 UTCMarvin...ya dumb ass! :-o
thefooltouchstone
2018-10-12 22:57:25 +0000 UTCI'm so hyped! get him Sharlene!!!
RainbowScreen
2018-10-12 22:50:04 +0000 UTCSharlene's wet body looks so fucking HOT from this angle! (or any for that matter)
TimParaxade
2018-10-12 22:48:25 +0000 UTCUh-oh. We have trouble on the horizon.
ArdenW
2018-10-12 22:46:26 +0000 UTC
