Hot Shit High Ch 2, Page 5
Added 2018-09-15 21:57:57 +0000 UTCBack on track! Page 5 is done and it's onto page 6!
There wasn't any action or sexy bits in this page BUT this page and the following are important for story related reasons :) I enjoyed working on this page too since it featured Envy and Mi-hee. Getting those stacked bubbles in just the right spot in the first panel wasn't easy! But luckily they manage to introduce themselves by making a stupid joke AND name-dropping each other so the reader knows who is who early on.
WaHaHaHahaa~ buncha idiots...
Comments
oh, and THE HAIR on that coach.
Buzzkill
2018-10-16 07:29:10 +0000 UTCfu fu fu is pretty good. Although I picture that one being more fitting for a girl like Mi-hee... it helps to match the laugh to the character!
Erotibot
2018-09-25 18:35:40 +0000 UTCI just had to post here how I like a diversity of snarky anime girl laughs. Some personal favorites are "we he he", "fu fu fu" and "ka ka ka".
Bugberry
2018-09-25 17:43:10 +0000 UTCHahaha you WOULD hope that! :P Well all I can say is... hmmmm actually maybe I'll just say nothing for now and leave it at that xD
Erotibot
2018-09-16 17:35:56 +0000 UTCAmazing * ^ * And the new girls are so cute! I hope they can all be... very... good friends
Caffeccino
2018-09-16 17:12:02 +0000 UTCAt first I thought this post was a warning, until I read the rest lmao. But yeah.. maybe I don't need to preface any of my posts with any "these pages are for plot" statements. I think everyone gets that lol.
Erotibot
2018-09-16 13:58:57 +0000 UTCCareful Erotibot, first it starts out with "these two pages are needed for plot" and then suddenly it's "I know we haven't seen any sex in 40 pages but it's for worldbuilding". Just like the way InCase's Alfie has been going. Which is why it's my favourite comic... Right! So yeah! Be careful or you might accidentally start making a masterpiece! ... I think I got off track..
Thaldor
2018-09-16 12:18:15 +0000 UTCI really want to see Sharlene get another shot at landing it, but I have a feeling Coach isn't going to let her have a second go.
ArdenW
2018-09-16 03:09:16 +0000 UTCPotentially... I said that about the first chapter and that never came to fruition, so I don't want to make any promises this go around, but we'll see...
Erotibot
2018-09-16 02:19:40 +0000 UTCYou're just gonna have to wait and find out what I have in store! :X
Erotibot
2018-09-16 00:46:42 +0000 UTCWill we get to see Envy and Mi-hee have sexy time with the boys? They're really cute by the way.
Naj
2018-09-16 00:43:53 +0000 UTCYeah... I studied up on how to letter and create proper word bubbles, if you can believe it. I learned how to stack bubbles and how to create better reading flow throughout the pages. The way they do it in Western comics is distinctly different from manga and doujinshi. Unsurprisingly, it's a lot of work and requires some thought and planning to get right, but it's a really fun aspect of creating these pages. When the pages are easy to read you stay engaged and have a better time.
Erotibot
2018-09-16 00:21:17 +0000 UTCGlad you like 'em... cuz we're gonna see a whole lot of them XD
Erotibot
2018-09-16 00:18:01 +0000 UTCThis page is so good, even without everything else. Just looking at that first panel introducing the new girls is so good. The perspective of them looking down right from the start of their introduction just says a lot about them as it is. And like you mentioned those word bubbles. Oof, so good! Flowed so well! Love these new girls, man. Your cast is all amazing. The goodness~
Tahldon
2018-09-15 22:07:23 +0000 UTCThose new girls are absolute cuties
A-T
2018-09-15 22:01:29 +0000 UTC
