SUTD - Chapter 6: Dinner or Breakfast (13)
Added 2023-02-25 14:32:54 +0000 UTCI know I've said I'll utilize "show, not tell" but trust me, this is necessary.
You guys know I don't draw female characters a lot (for obvious reasons) and I'm kinda struggling when it comes to keeping Carla's face consistent lol. I'll work on that.
Also, world's most useless fact: this is the first time I've reached 13 pages in a chapter. More will come soon!
Edit: there was a typo in one of Carla's dialogues lol I fixed it.
Comments
I am so curious to know more about them and their back stories. I wanna know more about D but even more about Gio! I’m in love with him.
Luiyere
2023-02-28 18:36:38 +0000 UTCI'm so happy to have you guys around
Helbai
2023-02-26 03:56:18 +0000 UTCThe "show" is always great. But some "tell" is always appreciated. We love to see Henri and D, but knowing more of them is great 👌🏻
Dunabran
2023-02-25 23:26:13 +0000 UTCThis *is* showing us, rather than telling. You didn't hand us a character reference page with his backstory, it's being explained *in* story. We're not getting pulled out to have something explained to us, but seeing character interactions that are also explaining a thing. I for one think this is a fine way to get a little exposition in.
Ansixilus
2023-02-25 18:08:33 +0000 UTC
