Strife and Discord (and a little Chaos)

this one i still like, it looks vintage

I swear I can't find you guys on Discord. I've downloaded the app, registered, but whole place is dead, cannot find any servers. :(

sumblinker

I like the idea of a dark circus themed outfit for Alice, but the bottom of the dress and hair really doesn’t sit well with me.

I love the colors picked for the tweedles. While I don't necessarily mind the greens added to her outfit, the shape is just a bit too wonky. I am not a fan of the wig. However, I could see her with french braids, and a jester collar. I am mostly concerned about the bottom part of the outfit. Otherwise, its alright. Definitely take away the wig though.

I like the dark side so, I wish it'll go even darker and even more weird. I'm not sure about the bottom part, it may be too much contrast with the top. Why not to give her a funny skirt as well? May be something like dirty, ripped assimetrical petticoat? It's a circus so it can go wild, right? )

I like the colors of circus dress. Since XIIIth Century, green (and yellow) has been the color(s) of the Devil. That's part why I also loved the bargaining dress as it was and feel it is misplaced as King of planets suit.

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ha! I see a lot of folk not liking the hair. Want to have some serious fun? Make her head larger. Seriously? Yes. Seriously. Circus' are very over the top, larger than life and having her go "big head mode" (along with a lot of the residents of said Circus" makes for a very imposing, disturbing, and delightfully macabre style. It feels like her hairstyle is a way to emulate the classic clown Fro', though the actual look doesn't quite fit it. Want to make her look harlequin-esque ? make her bald with a funky jingle bell hat on it... Or give her the option of wearing a reversible mask that is the "comedy and tragedy" mask and depending on which one she uses, it has a varied effect on her abilities... or how the world of the circus itself looks.

Sterling Treadwell

I think the dress is alright, the bottom looks a little weird and maybe the colors but i kinda like it. It's one that the longer you look the more it doesn't seem as bad. I always love the darker themes but i think maybe bright could work for this outfit.

Brandon-Stephanie Runge

Nope.

I don't really like the hairdue. Like Lae said, maybe high pigtails with some blood at the ends.. and maybe a bang to go along with it

love the idea but not the outfit

Love the outfit for the theme, but not a fan of the hairdo. Perhaps a ponytail or pigtails, slightly bloodied at the end? Just an idea. :)

I'm echoing and agreeing with the sentiment that I love the idea of a circus theme, and exploring that, but I don't feel that outfit is working or the hairstyle, and it doesn't feel as creepy or unsettling as this theme could potentially be, if that's the desired direction with it.

This could be lots cuter...not a fan really.

First, I love that all of the Alice team is exploring new ideas artistically! I think that is super cool and important and I 100% support that. However, I am not loving Alice's Circus outfit.

You could keep the original hair and darken the colors of the dress, I think a darker dress would fit the mood just fine

Lovin' the dress, but not really diggin' the major change in hair. I'm just a lover of the simple straight hair she's always had in her previous games. It helps make her HER, in my opinion, if that makes any sense. Maybe a more simple change in hair style would be good. A small side braid, a ponytail. Nothing too major, the dresses are already wonderfully bizarre, a serious change in her hair feels just a tad overboard. At the end of the day though, I'm just excited to play this game, crazy hair or no. Keep up the wonderful work, you guys! 😁

I love the mask idea!

i like the idea of a circus. If she is going to parfticipate, and potentially "wrangle" animals, having the thematic whip to be ringmaster would be good. Since you have her in a sort of harlequin outfit, possibly a macabre puppet show or maybe having her "volunteered" in a magic act. I imagine having her be placed in the typical "magic box" and then watch her tumble down the ol rabbit hole while inside it..dodging swords thrust out of no where, giant saw blades rifling across the screen, skewers of rapiers jabbing towards her and so on, until she gets to the end and "safely" gets out of the box unharmed.. TADA!. . Sadly, I am NOT thrilled with the outfit. Mostly because flipped upside down it looks like some black and yellow super girl got shoved into a toilet... or a large goblet. Howe does this merge with the environment? how does it feel interesting and of value ?When I think of the level design aesthetic, if it has the general properties of the smaller shot of tweedle's then it looks like very strong dark visceral tones with high contrast and splashes of color, but overall lends towards a dark sinister tone. If that is the case, striking a balance so Alice looks like she belongs in that physical space (based on the lighting) but also is a strong enough contrast to the environment so the player can see her and not "lose" her in the action, or feel like they can't judge her positioning well with platforming. I almost would suggest sitting back and watching the old series from HBO, Karnivale. It has a lot of interesting aesthetic and thematic tones to it, so you might feel "inspired". What does the ciscus mean psychologically? or metaphorically? I often looked it as something of a "come and see the grand guignol of what being an adult is like! see the wonders we have found! watch as we perform feats no child can do! as we master even the fiercest of beasts!". Looking at the circus from that stance it starts as a potentially twisted but colorful "this is how great it is to be a grown up" and slowly as it transitions through gameplay, we see not only the "reality" of the characters in the circus but how NOT happy they are to be there performing under the tyrannical ringmasters(i.e. not happy with their place as an adult in life, job, family, government). You could do this as subtle, or broad strokes as you like, but with that would also potentially give alice an outfit that can transition too based how how this would influence her during the journey. Would she start out with a very 'black and white' style to clothing and transition into something more extreme? would it shift to lighter, subtle (shades of grey) tones as she understands the concepts of extremes and moderation? etc. Like I said, love the potential with the circus, asnd what the outfit could potentially reflect in her journey within it.

Sterling Treadwell

SUGGESTIONS and opinions: I adore circus/carnival themed stuff, and I think a circus level would be amazing in the new game, especially if Alice had to perform. However, I'm not a huge fan of this outfit. First off, I like the idea of a more unique hairstyle/wig in the outfit, but this wig feels too 'old' for Alice (not too mature, just drab, it's hard to describe). And I think making it look a little more disheveled (which goes for the whole outfit) could help. And with the dress, one of my biggest issues is the colors. I think the color pallete needs to be simplified (less colors, more contrast, like red, black, and white like another person suggested) or go really crazy (lots of colors) and be more saturated, as I think it would feel more circus-like. And I think the dress could look better with more layers, poofiness, or perhaps more asymmetry. I think it needs to feel more chaotic, since to me that represents the idea of a circus show. Anyway, I don't hate the idea, I just feel like this dress might not be quite there yet. Kudos to Omri, though, for exploring different ideas and possibilities. It's my favorite part of the process to watch. :)

I love the idea of a circus theme! I like the colours used in the dress, reds,blacks, golds but I'm not fussed on how it's presented, it feels Elizabethan. Instead perhaps red/gold corset dress with striped stockings? the hair, maybe pigtails or twin plaits with red ribbons and skulls in the bows? or even a hat such as a mini top hat with red ribbon flowing from it and a small skull.

I like the idea of a creepy circus theme but the dress doesn't quite convince me, especially the wig. I think it needs more "creepyness" somehow... I'm not good with outfits so I don't really know what to SUGGEST(ION)(?) but my thought is the colors should just be red, white and black mmm with some yellow? Idk ... And/or maybe some blood stains and making it more tattered will help oh and definitely keeping her natural hair but maybe reddish with some decorations? OR maybe some pigtails!? Ye... I would absolutely LOVE to hear Alice sing!

I'm not fond of the outfit. It's not very appealing. More like appalling .😂 I was thinking though the tweedles wouldn't put her in something pretty anyway. So I guess it suits the theme. A clown dress would be cute with pigtails.

Suggestion. The dress doesn't speak to me either, it simply falls out of the atmosphere that Alice has, otherwise said the dress is not creepy enough and the enslaved idea is non-existent. My suggestion, if you want to stick with the clown dress, make it mote tattered, more abusive and maybe add something that makes it apparent that there is force/enslavement involved. Make it dark, so to say, right now she just looks like shes playing dress up. That said, the artist has an INCREDIBLE eye for detail and has a great talent to make each dress coherend

Oh and I would love to hear Alice sing!

Love that there will be a circus theme but do not like this at all. Doesn't fit. I feel there's so many more cool creepy things that could be done with this theme. When I first saw the sneak peek on Instagram it made me think of the Tim Burton queen of hearts. Yikes! Please do not let this design stay!

Too bad there is no whip, it would go very well with this outfit that is reminiscent of a tamer tamer in a circus. Wonderful in any case !

I second the tutu idea!

I love the idea and actually the hair but the dress definitely needs some tweaking, especially the lower half.

I like it because it pleads this old century vibe, which is actually accurate with the universe of Alice Madness.

I like the circus dress and I love the idea, but the hair/wig doesn't really say "Alice" to be- but then again, that could be the point; maybe she wants to lose herself in the fun of the circus for a while and then she realises she's over her head. I'm wondering if something along the lines of a jester's hat, or her hair in pigtails would work, but then it's sorta edging towards Harley Quinn. Maybe some clown-esque makeup would accentuate things a little as well. I'm actually reminded of this old Pinocchio cartoon, "emperor of the night" or something, where Pinocchio has this big dream/ dance number where he seems to get what he wants and then it turns sour. As always I'm enamoured with the new developments and can't wait to see the finished product, and the Chaos Coin.

Rob Burch

Question/Suggestions: Understand the hair (more aligned with clown motif) but don't 'like' it. How about Harlequin (half and half) for the dress...could make one side edgier the other less so to show the conflict going on both within and without...also make clashing colors that would give the viewer a 'fingernails on chalkboard' reaction. I think singing is okay; but how about while on the high wire or trapeze - aerial battles would be interesting while having to travers the 3 rings of the circus/her psyche. Just some thoughts....I very much liked the 1st patches, and the license proposal booklet art, as well as the dresses so far - with the few comments on them I've made...the coins look great, impatient for there arrival!

I am absolutely in love with this concept! I like the idea of a wig that’s fits into the circus theme a little more than Alice’s natural hair even if this one isn’t quite right. One SUGGESTION I have, what if this outfit is a kind of metaphor for Alice hiding from herself, thus the wig and costume and maybe performing in the circus?

Rhia

I think the outfit might look better as a romper or a full blown jumpsuit. That being said, the colors are great! Might it be too much to ask if the colors darken throughout the level as things begin to go south? As far as the hair is concerned.. I enjoy seeing a different style atop her head but if the theme is “vintage clown” I believe that a short to medium length 20’s flapper hairstyle could be fitting. If she is forced to perform and possibly sing, I’m thinking hints of a more burlesque style could really revitalize this outfit.

I love the dress design, but: SUGGESTION I don't think it should be a dress at all. It would look hundreds times better without the skirt, but as a body suit or something. Just like circus members wear. Otherwise, Omri, poke poke poke! There is no point in doing boring designs. Looking forward to more!

im in love with the outfit colours but i have to agree the hair is...distracting. what about curly hair? a regular short cut? or something more based around a vintage clown look besides just the colour choice

Ae

I like the design, but I can imagine being bor colorful and contrasted. I also love the little hat, but not sure about the har...

I agree with previous comments that I think this dress would look nicer in a blue/white/red or black/white/red colour scheme. Also maybe keep Alice's hair dark or maybe make it a really bright colour would be nice.

SUGGESTION: Maybe the Tweedles could force her to perform something involving fire, like walking on a fire rope, or jumping through rings of fire. Something that would make her really reluctant of doing it.

Priscila Nosoma

I like the style of dress but not the colours ,I think red ,Black and white like the twins outfits would be better and ballet style pumps would fit with the outfit rather than long buckled up boots which look quite modern . Hate the style and colour of her hair,dark colouered half up ,half down lose ringlets would be more in keeping with her age. The circus should definitely be scary. Love the Chaos coin set.

The dress is just strange, different, and chaotic enough that I actually really enjoy it. It's unpleasant in all the right ways, and I like the combination of what Alice would vs wouldn't wear. Perhaps it'd be worth playing around with wig color - perhaps a streak (white, black, etc) or a different color design. I think Alice could pull off (more) face paint with this design as well - making it a little more clown and a little less madame. Perhaps a chaos symbol on her forehead, or around her eyes as face paint. I think heart lipstick could be pulled off here, too, and if any design were ever going to feature her with a single color contact, this would be it. There's a grace in its "beautiful ugly" subtlety, but I think given the sheer concept, it could be pushed even further. Great continued conceptualizing, Omri!

YES to singing Alice! And I actually like the dress. The wig is terrible and I dislike the makeup, but I like the dress. It needs a bit of work, but the general concept is nice. I'm very passionate about circus aesthetic and this could be a lot more creepy and twisted in my opinion.

Priscila Nosoma

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Priscila Nosoma

Not a fan of this dress. I'm fine with clown inspired looks but this is just nope.

I really love the slingshot idea!

Priscila Nosoma

Oh and squeeeeeeee for the chaos coin, so excited ❤️

I like parts of the dress (the patterning and the bodice) and love that Omri isn't scared to try different stuff. The wig is just nasty, looks like a bad 80's do. Maybe black and red, but a vibrant red, uneven stripes with a wild backcombed type style? The hat is cute, but needs to be more noticeable, maybe taller so it's a bit like the hatters hat? Oh and go dark, the circus should definitely be scary as hell and so should her outfit.

I like parts of the dress (the patterning and the bodice) and love that Omri isn't scared to try different stuff. The wig is just nasty, looks like a bad 80's do. Maybe black and red, but a vibrant red, uneven stripes with a wild backcombed type style? The hat is cute, but needs to be more noticeable, maybe taller so it's a bit like the hatters hat? Oh and go dark, the circus should definitely be scary as hell and so should her outfit.

I don’t hate nor like it. I’m a bit split in between, which is just the feel the dress seems to exhale. There looks to be two sides of the dress. The top half looks like tweedles are trying to make a fool of her, which plays in the whole theme of them forcing her to play a part in their circus and do a ton of ridicolous (and horrific) things. And a portion of their fun goes into dressing her up in this clownish-like costume. Whilst the other part actually looks like something she would wear; the skirt, boots and leggings (and maybe the knife aswell). It could be of her choice and therefor her way of standing her ground, and not letting the Tweedles play with her altogether. Even if the dress wouldn’t play a part in this, I still feel like the stort elements could make sense considering the circus theme. Growing up, feeling small and insignificant, many have this fear of being made fun of, how up or down the scale it may be. In the circus there are a lot of ridicolous elements playing a part in the making fun of thing, which taken to extremes could be something truly horrendous altogether.

The dress. No. No, thank you. No. Hate it. I'm all for a circus style dress if done right. Not this. Discord, well, if you're gonna' possibly do guest voice interviews, then count me in! I'll be linking my account shortly. ^~^

I like the dress, hate the hair. It looks more like it belongs to a medieval circus than a Victorian era one. Also, I linked my patreon with my discord but I still wasn't added to your server.

I'd really love to hear Alice sing ^^

Mokona

There's potential in the new dress! A 13 year old girl imagining a circus seems believable to me, the question is how to fight it in to the story. Not sure how I feel about Alice singing, seems out of character in the 'not quite right' way. I can imagine the Tweedles being a nuisance like in Disneys original Alice cartoon, just with a darker twist, pestering her into being in their show as in involuntary volunteer for magic tricks (maybe they do tricks like 'saw the lady in half', pull flowers out of her sleeves, etc). The whole circus setup do also have potential for a lot Victorian scariness. For the actual dress, I'm don't fancy the hair. Someone here posted a picture with two hair buns, which I really like. I love the colourscheme and I like the dress. There's something unorganic about the shape of the corset, which I think fits in with the whole "somethings not right" atmosphere. Corset were used to force the waist into a specific, in this case very unnatural, shape, and isn't that sort of what her therapists (at least Bumby) tries to do? I'm also reminded of something my mother told me as a kid. She told me about some paintings, I don't remember if it was crying children or sad clowns, but she wouldn't have them in the house, because then the house would burn down (and that was why the clowns/children looked sad). I did the survey monkey and I'm pretty sure there was an option to put in email and such at the time. If not, I send you an email about my interest in it (:

I really like the side buns hair you did! It looks awesome.

The skirt and leggings fall a little out of theme on the dress. It's certainly an interesting way once the forced participation starts, like a transition from audience to circus freak. Perhaps she could be humming some disturbing and creepy tunes as well during the time she is wearing this dress, to further drill down she is falling to madness.

Rhiannon has a few twists of the dress that i like. Clowns back then were not an over the top like they are now. The simple dots are fine. The hair not so much, the hat is good. The corset looks wrong which maybe is why its not well recieved. The petty coat style in rhiannons post looks better. I like the goth boots.

I cannot say I love outfit overall. I like the top but the skirt needs more work. The wig reminds me 50s - 60s hairstyles (Jackie Kennedy for example) which I personally don't like. And the hat looks very odd on her wig - it is very small and can be easily lost for viewer. This outfit needs more madness, for now it looks like some fashion designer made a model for autumn show.

I like this dress and the wig idea SUGGESTION: OFF mode: - the hair/wig color could be vivid (bubble gum pink for instance) - I would be happy if the colors of the clown dress were purple, lime green and sky blue - the skirt could have fluffy shimmery pompons like they are made of sparkle organza fabric to make the look more childish and...well...magical - boots could be shorter (ankle high) - the stockings could have some pattern (flamingo) ON mode: - all the colors are inverted - pieces of shattered glass replace pompons - the wig is torn and covered with ash, Alice's natural hair is sticking out of it like a rose spikes - the flamingo stockings pattern is replaced with a bird skulls pattern - the "make up" is horribly smudged like the rotten tomatoes were thrown at Alice's face - the hat is replaced with bird skull and the wig looks like a nest I'm pretty sure I butchered English language with this comment ¯ \ _ (ツ) _ / ¯

I truly hate the whole outfit this time (a part from the boots). If Alice is going to look like a clown, why can't she look creepy? I mean she is going through a psychological crisis, why not reflect it in her outfit?

I don't like the middle part of the circus dress, just around the hips it kinda looks unnatural. Maybe change it to some sorta corset or something. The hair looks a biiiit old...just saying like my grandma would wanna see when she is getting out from the hair salon XD

Jessi St.

SUGGESTION for the circus dress. I think a tutu would better suit a young ‘clown’ Alice. Maybe a makeup change (check out Amanda Palmer from the Dresden dolls, particularly her eyebrows 😉)And for the performance I would say more of a ‘death defying’ stunt like a tight rope or her being strapped down to a wheel while the tweedles throws knives at her. Just an idea :)

I really don't like the hair. The dress is nice. But the hair! It just doesn't fit at all.

she needs more makeup maybe make it a little rough, because she is going through a lot. I think her outfit needs to be bright. I know these games are darker, but this outfit should be bright, she needs to stand out in it. Just a thought. I honestly hate the way it looks now. I like the little hat, but maybe make it a tiny bit bigger or change it to a bow. I'm not a fan of how her hair is styled at all. I like the idea of it being up, just not like that.

I really dislike the wig concept, but the general look of the dress is wonderful. I think depending on the level a more whimsical color scheme would be lovely; maybe even a more black/white Pierrot type look?

Legion Ratfell

Bearded Alice xD

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I had some ideas on the dress, maybe you'll like it :) No pressure though. I think the dress looks great regardless. Im really digging the colour scheme <a href="https://imgur.com/a/84l5gsU" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://imgur.com/a/84l5gsU</a>

Rhiannon Vanderlinden

I personally am okay with the dress, but hair is a miss... Singing Alice, on the other hand, is fantastic idea!!! Would love to hear that!

Honestly, I really love this new outfit and for her to be a performer I would expect a wig or different hair. As for people who take issue with it, I guess be glad there are multiple dresses like the first game to enjoy. People don't have to love every single dress, I imagine that you can swap dresses like in Madness Returns once you beat it and go through again. All I know is I love it and love the variety. The chaos coin set up etc all looks just beautiful.

I'm IN LOVE with the top half of the outfit. the shape, the colors, the ruffle neck, EVERYTHING. The skirt doesn't go though.

My instagram comment got featured in the post lol I’m mildly embarrassed but now that I’ve seen the whole picture, I can say it’s an interesting base idea (a circus-inspired outfit) but I just don’t like the execution of it. The hair looks more like it belongs in Hairspray than Alice. The big hips look a little goofy. The colors are not my cup of tea, but that’s not a big deal. I agree with some other Patrons who have suggested maybe pigtails (retaining Alice’s hair color and length), and a similar harlequin style (ie. diamonds, red/white/black color scheme) but a with different shape to the dress. I think the shades of green are what’s really throwing me off, it just doesn’t look like it belongs. I’m in love with Omri’s other designs, however!! Please don’t take it personally :) Also SINGING ALICE! I would love to hear more of Chris Vrenna’s amazing music, and to have Alice sing would be incredible.

rachel

I think a circus theme would be fantastic and is something I never realized was missing from an Alice game all along, but not like this. The hair is the worst part for me, not that I'm opposed to Alice donning different hair styles. It's just so cheesy. Now, I'm regretting not spending more of my time practicing my art because I have a concept in mind I'd love to render, but I couldn't do it justice just yet. Which comes to a... SUGGESTION: I'm thinking more of a ringleader suit outfit with a slightly more dignified shape, cool colors like cobalt, royal purple, navy and maroon for contrast, white trim and big buttons. 'Gloves' that are actually just fading and scuffed paint up Alice's arms. Maybe some ruffles too. Something like Mad Moxxi (How fitting a character for a design reference!) from Borderlands, but less revealing and with a more appropriate amount of cleavage, that is to say, none. I imagine this outfit to be somewhat distressed-looking in the normal mode and nightmarish in chaos mode. Scary clown makeup? SUGGESTION: With my idea for a ringleader-type outfit, maybe the plot of a circus-themed level could be that Alice is suck(er)ed into performing in it as a singer/dancer/choreographer/announcer which would be an opportunity for her learn to handle pressure and responsibility, something psychologically traumatized people tend to avoid or neglect. Not sure how that could work into the stages of grief. Maybe as part of the relatively newly defined Testing phase? I'd kinda like to see sections of the game that are somewhat like short, sidebar stories mainly for character development. Also, YES PLEASE let Alice sing!

Jay Olsen

I dont care for the dress, but hate the hair. and this is the first time I felt so strongly about any of them! usually I love them. I Agree with Stephanie, knowing the role may help. then have the clothing fit the role (Lion Tamer, High wire etc..) but interesting to see new ideas

I love the circus idea! And the singing!! SUGGESTION: Maybe if we figure out what specific role she has in the circus, it would help zone in on what type of outfit design to go for. Like an acrobat, a juggler, a clown, etc. The top part of the outfit seems clownish to me (my favorite parts are the makeup and the neck piece) but I feel like the outfit could go more "clown" as a whole if that's what she is. Like more poofy.

Definitely a no from me on this dress. Not sure if it is because the circus theme doesn't fit in my mind for Alice or that this particular dress doesn't represent it properly. A rework needed in my opinion. Also unrelated QUESTION: If I go up to $75 for Patreon, do I get to choose the artwork I want? If it is a monthly cycle then what is August's art print?

Agree that this isn't the best costume submitted by Omri and that is in no way a criticism of him as he is nailing things so far. I'd like to see more of a feminine adaptation of the tweedle costumes. Bold lines and for the hair maybe pigtails? Maybe even a harlequin style masquerade mask? Something like this style but in whites and reds? <a href="https://goo.gl/images/vQYxKh" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://goo.gl/images/vQYxKh</a> Food for thought is the most delicious.

A clown down-voting the clown outfit.. interesting ;)

American McGee

I've said before: This is a democratic dictatorship. Opinions will be read and taken into consideration but that doesn't mean we'll have 'majority rule' (unless the majority is in alignment with The Way). Still, voices need a place. Your voice - and this opinion you've stated - is here, along with everyone else's :) I think what's important (critical in fact) is that we don't make it about 'them' 'us' etc. There's a larger tribe and an overarching goal. We need to keep that in mind. Perhaps, with that in mind, I should not have highlighted the positive/negative Instagram comments in the way I did... which I thought was fun... but perhaps leads to the taking of sides? Anyway... let's live and learn ;)

American McGee

I’m going to have to say no to this one. I love circus themes, but it looks more like she’s wearing a Christmas sweater. Also not a fan of the hair.

I also think a huge issue is that it almost appears she is lacking eyebrows

SUGGESTION: So how about exploring the possibility of Alice's hair being an extension of the dress/outfit she is currently wearing? Each dress would then have a distinct hairstyle enhancing the look of each dress. Imagine the ladies turning out for a Royal Wedding and the hats they might wear...only the hats are Alice's hair. Regardless, the artwork is enjoyable and easy on the eyes 😊

Completely agree, not liking this dress at all. Needs redesigning, not too sure what to suggest though... other than why she has those in your face hips?! Haha

RozaMay

Not a fan of the hair but I love the clown design overall

I don’t mind the dress or the hair, but it doesn’t make me think of “Alice” at all. The change in hair color (from black to red) makes me think of the Disney’s ver. of Queen of Hearts

LockVII

This one definitely needs reworking. The face and hair are too remniscent of the Queen of Hearts in Disney's Alice franchise.

SUGESSTION: think this dress has potential, I would ditch the muddy colors and stick with vibrant black red and white. And maybe pigtails or a loose bun in the hair, as that is what a lot of performers style their hair with

SUGGESTION: Look at <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harlequinade" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harlequinade</a> that has the first take on Harlequin clowns in England and work from there. It has what is considered the general costume and roles played.

Morgan LeFay Dethen

I really like the idea of this clown costume it has potential it needs adjusting but overall I don't HATE it . maybe something more puppety? SUGGESTION so last week I made s comment about marbles and I thought I made throw in another idea. What if Alice had a slingshot with marbles she could collect with different damaging ability stun or electrocute or even just knock the head of their shoulders. I thought it would be a fun range weapon. Im excited for the chaos coin and I can't wait to get new Alice story bits 💗

I really like the circus dress. For some reason it reminds me of circus monster, one of my favorite horror song. I can just imagine her being forced to sing right now. "Hey get up you worthless circus monster". Anyone else here know that song?

Lucas Severin

Now that I've seen the full dress it has grown on me more (though the colors remind me of Christmas), but I still can't stomach the hair. It's nothing against Omri of course, just personal taste.

Destiny Jenson

Not a fan of the hair. I think the costume is interesting though but with a different color scheme though. Maybe red and blue instead of the green.