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08/25/2022

Excuse me for erasing and posting again. I was going to give up, but I finished it anyway D:>
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Btw, Is that "for a long time" correct to use? 

08/25/2022

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Thinking of Pink and Broccoli as roommates sounds like it could lead to a lot of lewd and funny situations. Also yes 'for a long time' is used correctly here. However, I would say "Somebody did lewd poses" over "Somebody did lewd posing".

Lynarto

This is really cool! They look like a really fun dynamic!

GeeGee

I see! Then I think it does work. I think more emphasis should be put on the way Pink says "someone", almost as if she's being passive-aggressive.

Hibari


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