Jalter Doujin 2, page 41
Added 2021-08-06 18:30:55 +0000 UTCI had a major issue on this page (that could be modified by changing previous page + 4 firsts panels here) which creates too many breaks during/before sex phase, making Jeanne asking for it as during page 37, 33 and 28.
I'm wondering if it's not "too much", making it less relevant with quite a feeling of "seriously.... again ..?" for the reader (and kinda for ritsuka too i guess lol)
What's your toughts about it, if you have time/will to check previous pages and have a opinion about it ? :)
Comments
oof that thumb on the lip is so hard hitting <3
Citrus
2021-08-06 19:19:46 +0000 UTC
