BLINK
Added 2021-06-17 23:53:48 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
So, I'm not completely sold on the dialogue for this one yet
2 versions!
The original is the first one,
Not only It makes more sense that the guy doesn't know what the girls are talking about,
but it also gives it a more melancholic feeling, followed immediately by that chick talking about stuff that makes it all more chaotic :p
The second maybe its more clear...
but dunno... maybe I'll add it as complement(?)
This might be a rare case when I end changing all the dialogue over the weekend,
who knows :p
but the art its finished so I decided to share it anyway :3
PS: For a little more context, she's a body hopper :3
but she just swap with willing targets (she somehow can feel it)
so I guess she just got tired of the situation she was in :p
Somewhat based on Sam T's suggestion "All girl school"
(from first 3 word poll) but went on another direction :p
Hope you like it!
and let me know what you think :D
Comments
Body swap, yup.
Sukiaida
2021-06-23 01:13:22 +0000 UTCThe guy is looking at the girl and being envious. The girl is a body Hopper that can only exchange with people that are willing and so switches with the guy when they make eye contact. The guy, now girl, is happy and fine because now their life won't likely end in suicide.
J DD
2021-06-20 05:08:59 +0000 UTCOhhh, excellent body-swap! He wound up quite the hottie!! I kind of agree - the second version is a bit more immersive, as he wouldn't know what they were talking about beforehand. I understood what was going on immediately, but I can see how those without a specific interest in body-swap might not catch on right away.
dragoncrescent
2021-06-19 00:57:31 +0000 UTCThe art is great, but I'm honestly not sure what is happening in this comic. Is the guy turning into the girl?
Blue Dragon
2021-06-18 19:48:05 +0000 UTCxD
Kannel
2021-06-18 18:07:10 +0000 UTCyeah, it's kinda hard to follow :P I think i have an idea already :3
Kannel
2021-06-18 15:39:49 +0000 UTCFun piece. Only problem that it may not be obvious what happened - at least I thought during 1st/2nd/3rd reading that boy was girl's (boy)friend. Or that girl has serious (secret) crush on him and reacts strongly when he acknowledges her Some visual cue needed?
punarotta
2021-06-18 11:29:14 +0000 UTCGreat work tg comics I like prefer with a transformation (sequence)
Stormfries
2021-06-18 06:26:25 +0000 UTCAnd then the other two become futa and yay all problems are resolved. :D *laughs* ^^ Fantastic image.
Winkin
2021-06-18 06:23:54 +0000 UTClol yeah xD
Kannel
2021-06-18 01:31:31 +0000 UTCOh it's a body switch ?
Actrus
2021-06-18 01:11:42 +0000 UTCI'm not sure to have totally understand what happens here tbh 😅 sorry
Actrus
2021-06-18 01:08:24 +0000 UTC
