A Blessing or a Curse: the Origin of a Superhero, Pt 3
Added 2020-09-17 23:30:01 +0000 UTCI hope you guys enjoy today's early upload, the continuation of the superhero series written by the fantastic AJ Strange!
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aj strange
2020-09-19 01:31:22 +0000 UTCI love the chemistry and banter between our leading lady and her new friend. I like that the two still keep in touch and that the main character feels comfortable enough to be open with her about how the therapy has been. I also like how you focus on the more serious and mental-health-based aspects of the story rather than just zooming into the “she has powers and will now fight crime” part of the story. Instead, I like that you take the time to look at the trauma this story of life is causing the MC and I’m glad her friend is so supportive. “Why does a superhero need gas anyway?” LOL, this script has some great little jokes/one-liners in it! Also, accurate description of a gas station snack selection, LOL: “chips, chips, chips and more chips” “Lady Car-Door-Opener” LOL See, watching these two banter about superhero names is so funny and cute! I love these two! “He’s cooling off… in the ice cream section.” LOL AJ’s gearing up to be a comedian and DA is voicing it perfectly! LOL! Great job DA on the SFX! You managed to make the fight scene fairly intense despite only using a few SFX! I also think you did really well on the voices! I like how the hero has this soft, shy, sweet sort of voice while her friend sounds more mature and deeper-toned. It makes them easily distinguishable and I just think the hero sounds cute! And not only that, but I’ve read the script before, and you REALLY did so well bringing it to life as a conversation between two distinct characters. That’s not to say AJ’s writing was confusing, it just felt clearer listening to it being voiced out fully. Awesome job! Great work to both DA and AJ! This part was really cool and fun to listen to! (Also, I support and stan “Lady Strong Hands” as the canonical name for our MC)
Irhaboggler
2020-09-19 01:27:20 +0000 UTC😏
aj strange
2020-09-18 22:14:49 +0000 UTCAm I the only person, wondering when a Super Villain is going to appear?
Matthew Potter
2020-09-18 17:22:33 +0000 UTCOops, sorry, you had snow hihi
2020-09-18 04:47:36 +0000 UTCWe need to come back to home, but for too long?
2020-09-18 04:43:47 +0000 UTCAaaaah I forgot how much I love this character!!! 😍
PrimadonnaKath
2020-09-18 00:01:50 +0000 UTC🤔
aj strange
2020-09-17 23:44:09 +0000 UTCHow about we call her Lady Legacy? 😊
Dangerous' Freya❤️
2020-09-17 23:42:22 +0000 UTCBless you bro 💯👏🏿👏🏿😇
Joshua Frye
2020-09-17 23:34:37 +0000 UTC(((🦸♀️)))
aj strange
2020-09-17 23:31:57 +0000 UTC💯👍🏿🎧 lets goo💯💯🔥
Joshua Frye
2020-09-17 23:31:16 +0000 UTCYay uwu ❤️🤗😊 our hero’s back for more!!
Dangerous' Freya❤️
2020-09-17 23:30:52 +0000 UTC
