Soldier Updates
Added 2024-02-19 19:36:41 +0000 UTCThere have been three patrons that have had trouble seeing the last update for Soldier's Life. We just started book 3 so there is a new collection for that. It can be found here:
https://www.patreon.com/collection/385643?view=expanded
There seems to be a problem with Patreon when I move draft chapter to change which tiers can view it. I check the box to send out an update to everyone but Patreon still shows the chapter as the date I posted it as a draft for the Seraphim tier. I did it this way so everyone could see the comments the Seraphim subs made as the chapter goes through minor rewrites. There will always be two chapters released every week for this story planned for Wednesday.
Comments
Yep, that is a definite mistake then
Erick Thiemke
2024-02-20 03:21:29 +0000 UTCWhat I meant to say is that rather than calling them composite bows, in a few chapters you called them compound bows.
Bryan Schnebly
2024-02-20 03:20:39 +0000 UTCcomposite long bows is correct, they are Mongolian horseman bows. Technology bled through the ages to the world by other worlders. As for edits…post them in book 1 collection. I rushed to publish after someone stole the story. I know I need to eventually hire an editor before I hire a voice actor for the audio book
Erick Thiemke
2024-02-20 03:10:22 +0000 UTCWhere do you want editorial comments on the book released on Amazon? I've just 2 nits to pick right now. First, under the table where you spelled out which colors go with which attributes, you left in the note saying that you would go back to make sure everything lines up with the table. That should probably be removed as it isn't really part of the story. Secondly, in a few places you called the composite bow compound bows, which would be quite the technological feat for Roman level of crafting. Even with those two nits, I loved reading the book all the way through as one work.
Bryan Schnebly
2024-02-20 02:53:09 +0000 UTCyou just missed the post last Wednesday....follow the link above. i will try to think of a way to bypass the Patreon platform shortfalls
Erick Thiemke
2024-02-19 22:08:56 +0000 UTCIt’s been many weeks
Dragon
2024-02-19 22:06:34 +0000 UTCThanks for this post! Definitely did not see those chapters... no mail notification either. Any chance you can ping us on discord when posting in this manner?
Robin
2024-02-19 21:12:46 +0000 UTCI resemble this remark, and I am proud to say I appreciate the call out :)
Cameron C
2024-02-19 20:52:58 +0000 UTCYeah, Patreon feed is broken. I had to go through collection and email
PatronTurtle
2024-02-19 20:07:04 +0000 UTCyeah that is when I posted the drafts for the Seraphim tier. It is frustrating because I have asked the owners of the platform for things and I am ignored. Being able to edit the date on a post would help me put things in order in the collections
Erick Thiemke
2024-02-19 20:06:49 +0000 UTCAlso weirdly enough patreon shows the posting date for 122 as Dec 28, 2023 and for 123 Dec 29, 2023.
Mr. Bro
2024-02-19 20:04:46 +0000 UTCIn the collection yes. But not otherwise and I do not get any notifications either.
Mr. Bro
2024-02-19 20:01:02 +0000 UTCChap 122 and 123 in that collection are not visible to you?
Erick Thiemke
2024-02-19 19:57:53 +0000 UTCI don't see the updates.
Mr. Bro
2024-02-19 19:57:01 +0000 UTCthanks I also have not seen the two updates till now.
George Dashner
2024-02-19 19:45:45 +0000 UTC
