(thanks Emisary for this week's artwork)
Hey guys. Firstly I need to apologise for not finishing my writing task on Wednesday like I said I would. I was sure it was enough time.
I'm struggling with something I often struggle with, how to make the sex scene as hot as the lead-up to it. Various things I thought would work haven't, and the whole thing feels hokey and meh to me. I've been desperate to get this stage finished, so I'm demoralised and disappointed with myself.
I packaged up what I had anyway and sent it to alpha testers today. Hopefully their feedback and perspectives will help to solve the problem. (Some early comments have already been insightful.)
Tomorrow I'm gonna reflect on their advice and figure out what to do, I'm too tired and negative to figure it out tonight. I wanted so much to delay this report until I had something positive to report, but SuperMaxo and Bulb's comments on Discord encouraged me to put this out. Sorry for yet another writing delay. 🦀 💔
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