Episode 1.19.1 available to everyone!
Added 2023-08-27 20:21:40 +0000 UTC(This is the free version. If you're a patron, get the enhanced version here.)
Hi guys! Here's episode 1.19.1P, "The New Girl".
This was a controversial episode, receiving by far the most negative criticism of any episode of Female Agent. I made some scene edits based on the feedback, but be warned this episode missed the mark for a lot of people.
Please let me know your thoughts β positive or negative β so I can take them into account in future episodes. Hit me up here or on Discord!
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Comments
none of my images are loading in the offline version, have i done something wrong?
MPPM101
2023-10-18 23:02:01 +0000 UTCI like this. My two biggest issues with the last update were the BJ scene and this scene. If Crush can fix at least this one with better dialogue options, it would be a huge improvement.
Steve C
2023-09-04 21:24:49 +0000 UTCUp to this point, I've only left feedback twice. Both times with suggestions of things I would change. I wanted to start this comment off by simply saying that the game is one of two I consider top tier right now on Patreon. With that out of the way, I feel I have pinpointed the exact slide where some rewriting and edits could be done to solve the consistency problem with the heroine. This slide: ************* "Uhhh...no, I had no idea!" You feel a subtle heat rising up in your cheeks as you talk. Nin disliked that. Nin's eyes narrow and her voice turns testy. "Yes you did," she insists. "Don' worry, you don' have to fuck him, you not bargirl. Juss give him blowjob after training. Okay?" What? No! ************* Leads to this slide: ************* "What? No!" Nin tilts her head, her brows furrowing. "Why not?" Because I don't want to! It's not my job! Why should I? ************* This is the slide where Kate should take a moment to ask herself, "Why not". Allow her to be self-aware here. ************* After everything I've done. Fucking Connor and Kriangsak to get the job, continuing to fuck Connor to keep the job, the groping I've endured. The humiliation. Why does Miss Nin telling to to blow Bonaht bother me so much? It's just a fucking blowjob. But it's not, is it? It's an initiation. Nin is going to make me take him into the VIP room and treat him like a client. Even if she doesn't make me a bargirl today, this is where she decides where I'm worth more to her. The bar, or the brothel. I feel sick to my stomach.... etc. etc. etc. ************* Obviously the writing would have to be redone to fit Crush's style. But I do believe this is the critical slide that is missing the proper shift in Kate's perspective. Solve this and the incongruities disappear.
mengler23
2023-09-04 13:34:55 +0000 UTCI get that it's not for everyone (and that should never be your aim, for obvious reasons).. but I thought it was pretty fucking hot. Can't wait to see where it goes next :)
Thomas Reijerse
2023-09-01 23:34:47 +0000 UTC
