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[Ep 1.19] Beat sheets

Hey guys!  Last week I got to work making a beat sheet for the next episode.  It's currently 29 pages of planning, covering 18 new scenes (some in the club, and some introducing new locations in Bangkok).

Completing the beat sheet in detail enables me to spot and fix logic and pacing problems in advance. I think it will make the rest of the process smoother and faster.

I’m hoping to finish this tomorrow, and from Wednesday will move on to the next stage in the process, storyboarding. (The storyboard is a Google Slides doc that helps us design the way the individual story screens (‘passages’) are laid out; this is important for planning out exactly what avatar clothing, NPC avatars and location photos are needed.)

Things are going well! I feel like this is turning into a big chunky episode with several hot new scenarios for the heroine to experience. 

Okay, that's it, I’m gonna get back to work and will report on progress next week.

[Ep 1.19] Beat sheets

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can you please add scenes of hot sexual harassment in unexpected places like being touched on a bus or being stuck in a secluded street

Mith

Good ideias, specially 3, 4 and 7. I found this game a week ago, and maybe this was already discussed extensively, but adding another skin color and another body shape (or butt size) would highly increase the possibilities for your avatar. Just one of each would be fantastic.

Very hot ideas. Let’s see how this goes on…. Overall FA might be one of the best stories I‘ve played so far.

Juan Homa

Okay, incoming long post. This is a continuation of ideas and thoughts from a previous dev post as well as new thoughts about the game as a whole. Like everyone I've been playing each chapter at a time as they get released, but recently I played through the entire thing back to front a couple of times, and I have noticed a few details that you don't seem to get playing chapters upon release. Namely; 1. The MC feels way more professional when all combined together. The potential 'wet work' missions have really added to the character of both the MC and game in general. 2. The MC's thoughts about the job in general over several chapters fleshes her out as a nuanced character beyond the sum of the individual chapters. Overall I recommend anyone who hasn't played every chapter in a row to go do so. It will take over an hour but that is a testament to the amount of work this game has. Moving onto ideas and suggestions. Again, playing through all chapters has given me more ideas beyond what one would have by just playing through the latest chapter. Please keep in mind that one or two ideas may be lifted from others, I'm just incorporating them into one post. 1. More involvement from Miss Lu and Miss Nin as the MC grows closer to becoming a bargirl. This will be further explored in other posts but imo these two feel underused. The scene were they talk thai while assuming MC can't understand was really well done. And there should be more. 2. This idea from Das Flute in prev. post. Returning to the medical clinic for an examination before becoming a bargirl. 3. The return of Mr Kriangsak. I think everyone can agree that the bj in the car while he talked was both extremely hot and a great way in the future for MC to gather more information. My proposal would be for him to come into the club and have discussions with Lu and Nin while MC gives him a bj. This conversation could be about choosing MC over Roxy to become the new bargirl, and confirming tattoos, hair etc. It could be about club operations, furthering MC's knowledge. Or perhaps both. 3b. Being dragged by Lu/Nin over the city for tattoos, outfits, hair and piercings etc. 4. Further involvement with Connor. MC's observation that Connor is more passionate with her over others in the club is worth exploring. Getting closer to him and getting his guard down would be a good way of intel gathering. Perhaps a mission where he takes you home back to his apartment, and you use the opportunity to scope out his house. (Using the necklace to record.) 5. Mr Kriangsek's parties. The bargirls mentioned that they have had awesome parties at his mansion. I am assuming these are like the party with the rich boys but magnified. i.e drugs, booze, sex. Attending a party like this could lead to more info either on the other bargirls or more intel if other higher ups are gathering and booze loosens their lips. 5b. Following on that idea. A High class gathering where you are brought along by Mr Kriangsek as eye candy. Instead of a rave this is far more reserved and attended by other high ranking people in the Organised Crime. This should be after MC is bargirl, and acts as a good reason/reward for HQ allowing her to proceed. This also is potentially a good introduction of DEVILFISH. Seeing her target for the first time. 6. Quite simple, any person at the bar that has propositioned MC will have a chance with her once she becomes a bargirl. I can't remember why the South Africans were there but if they got a chance now that she is available it would be a great humiliating scene. 7. Another wetwork mission. However this one may involve the MC killing. I see this taking place after one of the previous ideas that allows HQ a shot at another part of OC. 8. I should have done this earlier. But either a face to face or screen meeting with HQ about continuing the mission once MC is confirming with being the new bargirl. There should really be a juxtaposition with MC trying to avoid that job at work but practically begging HQ to let her continue as one. HQ should really be concerned about bargirling, and if MC can give them more intel (perhaps from Connor in previous points) then they are perhaps more likely to allow her to do so. If something else comes up I'll add it, but for now I think that's all the ideas for now. To summarise; More Lu/Nin, Makeover, return Mr Kriangsek, seducing Connor, more high class meeting, integration with other bargirls, wetwork, bariglrl and intro to DEVILFISH. Just want to finish by saying that overall Female Agent is a really well written story, and I am looking forward to all future instalments.

Dairyfiend


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