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Happy Easter!

Hey guys, Happy Easter! Last week I started work on the next episode, White Russian.

The side quest itself is outlined, but around it we want a few more scenes in the club (so the main quest also advances). I planned out what all the scenes should be, and spent some time working out how to make them hot and interesting.

One scene in particular – which I think could have been quite ‘meh’ if we took the obvious path with it – has been made surprisingly hot with a little twist to the setup. 🥵

This week, I’m going to produce beat sheets for the scenes. I think these worked well in the last episode, and helped speed up delivery time overall. Even though it added an extra stage to the process, it ended up saving time in the editing phase.


Update on the Lifepath
Earlier versions of the game included a feature called the Lifepath, once memorably described as ‘the most absurdly detailed character creator ever’. The Lifepath let you play through your heroine’s youth, making key choices that would adjust her skills and experiences, and (once she was over 18) play through some of her defining sexual experiences.

It was lots of fun, but it was taking forever, so I took the decision to shelve it and focus on the main quest for a while. Recently there was a spirited Lifepath discussion on the game’s Discord, so I thought I should give you guys an update.


Required work
The Lifepath needs a few changes before we can link it up to the main quest:

1). The childhood section needs to be expanded so it works for all five nationalities (it currently only works for UK agents).

2). The university section needs to be concluded.

3). A career section, covering recruitment, training and agency career, need to be added.


Planned improvements
I think the early parts of the Lifepath (in version 1.11) work pretty well. It would be nice to add some more content, but it’s basically fine, and I think the only part that may need a substantial rewrite is the foreign adventure for Working Class heroines who aren’t British (working as a holiday rep in the Med is a very Brit-specific thing, we may need to write alternatives for North American/Australasian heroines).

I feel like the existing university section needs a rethink. What’s there is good, but it’s too linear. I think it’d benefit from a range of shorter, more varied encounters. For instance: 

So I feel like the uni section needs restructuring to add more width, variety and randomness.


Summary
The benefits of finishing and integrating the Lifepath are:

1). More differentiation of your heroine, which leads to
2). Opportunities to reflect that in the main quest.

The main criticism of the main quest is that it’s too linear. At some point in the future I want to go through it and add width, randomness and branching opportunities to the existing scenes; having a variety of character backstories to work with will really help with this. (As a simple example: knowing her past experience with drugs will make the main quest drug scenes easier to write and branch. Knowing if she’s the kind of girl who typically says yes or no to one night stands will make all the sex scenes easier to write and branch. etc)

So the official position is that I do plan to revisit, improve and integrate the Lifepath. However: doing that will, of course, mean we’ll have to work on that instead of the main quest. I think that, for now, it makes sense to push forward until at least the point in the main story where the heroine’s established as a bargirl before we jump back to the Lifepath and start adding width. 


TLDR
Lifepath yes, but not Soon™.

Happy Easter!

Comments

Totally forgot to respond to this post, but I must that guy that like the lifepath as much as the rest of the game :-). In fact, I'm still waiting the lifepath to return before restarting to play. And I hope the bicurious kink will come back one day.

DamnedFrog

Thanks for the great progress report. Looks like you still have a lot of work ahead of you. Well, then I wish you good luck and great productivity!

NakedSunFlower

Full agreement here. I hope Crush can integrate your ideas about the madams in the near future in the convergent pressure by the HCC to make the MC a bargirl. The idea to let them give her a makeover is hot and builds on previous scenes. Not sure if it would fit in the plot at this stage, but another makeover element the two may well deem appropriate (both for the job in general, and to give the MC the full Western bimbo/pornstar look) is a boob job.

Novamarauder

100% the focus should be on bargirl path rather than background at least for the moment. Speaking of… Is becoming a bargirl something that will happen in the next couple of updates or something planned down the line? I also think that it would be a good idea to have the two women who run the club take you to get a “farang whore” makeover. Things like tattoos, bleached blonde (or some wild colour). I feel like those two have been under-utilised, and could serve as devices to get the MC more submissive and better trained as a bargirl. Dominating her into obedience not through sex (although could be implemented) but rather through presence and authority.

Dairyfiend


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