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[Ep 1.16 “Girls Night Out”] Polishing
Added 2022-08-08 16:05:37 +0000 UTCHey guys! I spent most of last week polishing up the dialogue and description in story scene 1.
This scene resolves the cliffhanger ending from the last episode, and is a pivotal development in the overall story. (It's impossible for the heroine to become a bargirl without this plot development.)
This scene has lots of dialogue and emotion – the things I find hard to write – so it was a struggle getting it to a point that feels okay to release. Although it isn't specifically a sex scene, the underlying situation is sexy, so I wanted to bring that out in the scene and the heroine's thoughts too.
It was hard and it's still not as good as I'd like it to be, but I pushed myself and I'm cautiously okay with it now.
I also polished up story scene 2 which was much simpler. (I finished that today, which is why I reported today instead of yesterday.) Here's the situation:
I'm hoping this week to turn story scene 3 and sex scene 1 green and will report how that goes. 🤞🏻😬🤞🏻
Okay, that's it, I'm just buried in writing and tweaking and getting things ready. Lovely Victoria is working hard on artwork. I don't know when the episode will be released but it will be Soon™. Hope you like it, this one's been a lot of work.
Comments
God bless Victoria!
Candylight Studio
2022-08-12 09:21:43 +0000 UTCPlease take all the time you need and be sure I am confident your work shall be more than good enough, even if everything does not necessarily fit your perfectionist criteria. ;-) Having said that, I cannot really hide or restrain my eagerness and impatience to get the next release. Sexy spy/cop/journalist going undercover as a sex worker and discovering she likes the kink of the job is one of my most preferred porn scenarioes ever. What occurred so far was already excellent but the story is getting to the point where it shall be the most exciting for me. In this regard, your work has been a wonderful gift to me.
Novamarauder
2022-08-09 10:14:50 +0000 UTCYou really did a good job! Well, I hope you are not very exhausted after writing dialogues and emotions and you still have some energy left)
NakedSunFlower
2022-08-08 23:31:17 +0000 UTCLooking forward to it whenever it does release
jade nert
2022-08-08 17:37:23 +0000 UTCDon't worry if your scenes still don't feel right. You might find your solution in the future where you can simply patch it up then.
Johnny Rocketfingers
2022-08-08 16:34:39 +0000 UTCWell....we shall wait to find out what happens then. Im sure it will be a great scene.
Asmo316
2022-08-08 16:14:23 +0000 UTC
