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[Episode 1.15, week 2] Moar Writing

Hey guys!  Writing week 2 was pretty good.  I finished the "setup" scene I began last week, and started on the main sexy scene from 1.15.

Writing is like chess in some ways.  You need to spend some time manoeuvring all your pieces into position before you can execute the vision in your head.  (Unless you're Rian Johnson, then your characters can just come and go from a chase scene in progress.)

Unfortunately I'm not half-assing a Star Wars film, but working on Female Agent, so that was basically my work this week: getting various characters to where they needed to be in the narrative to make the next scene feel real.

Next week I'll be working on the exciting stuff!  Our heroine's like a frog in a pot of hot water, and the point of the next episode is to turn up the heat another couple of degrees.

I'm hoping to get all the writing done in the next two weeks, which would mean the next episode gets released sometime in February.

The amount of progress I make next week will be a good indicator.  Sometimes sex scenes flow fast, sometimes it takes me two attempts to get them right.  I'll report on progress next weekend.  Wish me luck.  πŸ€žπŸ»πŸ¦€πŸ€žπŸ»

[Episode 1.15, week 2] Moar Writing

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Thanks for the update. It gives me a lot of hope for this game. Normally, I'm not so keen on text based games. I tend to enjoy rpg themes better, but this game is an absolute gem. I enjoy both versions immensely, so it makes me excited knowing that the content in future updates gets even better and more in depth, no pun intended. ;) On a side note, I did have a question about future plans for expanded character customization. When you reach the tattoo and piercing options, will there ever be an option for a tramp stamp tattoo on her lower back, as well as genital piercings?

Steve C

Welcome to the party, pal! The plan is for the heroine to get "promoted" from topless bartender to stripper/hooker in the club. A few plot events need to happen first in order to make that believable, and they'll be the focus of the next few episodes. I feel like we're unlikely to ever restore the original briefing (or the related training missions in Scotland) because it feels more believable to me this way – that she starts off by agreeing to be undercover eye candy, but things escalate in the field. But never say never (maybe it could work as some kind of "quick start" option much later, to skip through the establishing episodes and get straight to the brothel with a new heroine?).

Crushstation

OK. I'm sure this has already been covered in a much earlier thread, but I'm new here, and I didn't feel like reading through years of comments. My question is this: Is the older version of this game completely finished, with the newer version being the direct continuation of the game? Or are there future plans to continue the story with the older version? The reason I'm asking is because there are certain minor continuity issues between the first and second versions. One major issue is the character's primary mission in the older version doesn't exactly line up to her mission in the newer version. In the older one, she's meant to be a stripper and prostitute and the Hard Cock Cafe. In this new one, she's just a topless barmaid, with absolutely no intention to become more than that. Are there plans to rectify that in future updates? If so, that would be great, because I've been so looking forward to when she starts selling her body at the club. Even so, I would have still liked to have started the new game with her original objective from the old version totally unaltered.

Steve C


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