The new Dubai sex scene has two broad paths: the agent can have sex on the balcony, or in the bed.
My original plan was to basically copy-and-paste the balcony sex content (which is largely complete) into the bed path. Which I did, but something about it wasn't quite landing.
The bed path just felt like a cut-down version of the balcony path. In a way that's fine – not every scene has to be exactly equal – but I just felt like something was missing.
In the end I went back to first principles: why do people even have sex in beds? Because it's more comfortable and you can do almost any position in it. That implies a different pace and different options from a quickie over the hotel balcony.
With that in mind, I made some changes to the structure, and it feels better now. Now the overall scene feels like a choice between two experiences: risky and exciting on the balcony, or longer and more intimate on the bed.
All this messing around means that I didn't actually complete any story points of work today, but I should catch up on the next writing day. Hyneman finished a task though!
Your agent now has a favourite position (chosen by you around the time she gets her first boyfriend). Partners get a bonus to their dice rolls when fucking her in that position. And Victoria drew some cool icons for the screen where you make your choice:

Okay, that's all for today. Tomorrow is scheduled R&R, so the next dev day is Sunday. Have a lovely weekend, everybody, and I'll see you then!
P.S. I have lots of messages that I haven't replied to yet – sorry to everyone who's written to me but is waiting to hear back. I'll aim to get caught up tomorrow!
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