Sprint 007 dev test
Added 2020-02-14 03:41:33 +0000 UTCHey Operator+! Thank you so much for supporting Female Agent. Here's another dev test of the sex scene.
In the last version, the balcony scene ended right before the sex. Now Max can fuck Carla over the railing, with a number of possible outcomes:
- Carla comes, then Max comes.
- Carla fakes it, then Max comes.
- Max comes prematurely, then tries to finish Carla with a hand job.
- Carla comes, but can't get Max off, so he applies "the shocker" (a finger in her ass) to liven things up.
- Carla and/or Max can come during the shocker scene.
- If Max doesn't come during the shocker, he asks Carla for a BJ.
- If Carla can't get him off with the BJ, he finishes by jerking off in her mouth.
The scene ends with a test of the new post-sex reflection system.
As always, it's less complete and less polished than I aimed for 9 sprint days ago; that said, I feel like the structure is basically there now. I aim to get this scene polished and properly integrated into the game in the next sprint. Please let me know your feedback.
Comments
That "Up for round two" is super hot and not in enough games.
Chris L
2020-02-14 23:33:28 +0000 UTCOne thing you might need to think about: If doing something a lot leads to being good at that thing, and being good at something makes that part of the scene end faster, you might be robbing people of extended scenes featuring their kink.
RedJoe
2020-02-14 21:21:16 +0000 UTCI quite enjoyed the new work. I think the post-sex reflection is a really good addition, it's great for the role-playing aspect. One small gripe is that it took me a while to trigger Max cumming in her mouth. I had to keep rolling back to try to fail the skill checks, and it made me wonder something: would you ever consider making a build where the player can choose the roll result? I'm someone who always wants to see every possible outcome, which leads to a lot of save-scumming. Just an idea to make the game a bit more lenient (a Patron-only version maybe?)
Vessium
2020-02-14 20:01:58 +0000 UTCI agree with Antilles about the status effects but you should certainly be proud of what you accomplished with the flow!
Greyduck
2020-02-14 17:03:48 +0000 UTCActually one little thing: before we had the icons for the status effects, the text only version told us what modifiers were being applied. It would be nice to be able to see that still, either via mouse over or perhaps a page on the character sheet.
Antilles
2020-02-14 15:26:27 +0000 UTCStill a lot of TBD, but I feel like you've hit on a really solid framework here. Good flow, good balance of dice rolls and choices, I especially liked 'from Jane Bond to a Bond girl.' And other than the aforementioned condom removal, I didn't find any errors. Great work, Crush!
Antilles
2020-02-14 13:34:47 +0000 UTCAs much as I don't want to give you more work, I suddenly thought of a choice chain that the agent could use to accomplish her goals in this scene. It would go like this: 1. Get Max to cum on her face 2. Go for his phone without cleaning it off 3. If he catches you in the act you tell him, "Oh, I couldn't see properly with this on my face, I thought this was my phone." The agent has a plausible out now.
hornguy6
2020-02-14 06:39:41 +0000 UTCReally digging this release, great work!
Gnu Bahde
2020-02-14 05:43:47 +0000 UTCWoooo! It's coming along! Love the regular updates and seeing the progress you are making. Also SUPER happy to see there's an option for the agent to ask for "Round 2"! I feel like you've got a really interesting way of bringing life into the sex scenes through the dice rolls and multiple choice options during the turns. Can't wait to see this executed in Bangkok with randomly generated characters and what not. But mostly really excited in the immediate to see how the other scenes in Scotland adjust to this, especially the backroom porno shoot—I hope the promiscuous agent can really impress the "director".
Toadsith
2020-02-14 04:32:52 +0000 UTCI know this is more about structure than anything else, but I thought I should let you know that if you get all the way to the jerk off scene, it references Max taking off a condom even though the only path for this scene is no condom.
hornguy6
2020-02-14 04:27:54 +0000 UTC
