Blazing Trinity ch11
Added 2020-08-08 05:40:25 +0000 UTCOh my god it's done! Ugh, this chapter was a pain, but in the end I'm very happy that I took the extra time on it. We ended up adding a big chunk to the middle, all from Florina's perspective, and I think it works well to explore the character and add a little more flavor to the world. Also, it fixed the pacing and flow of the chapter big time.
Sorry for the delay, and I hope y'all enjoy it!
Comments
Interesting spin on that battle, having a diversion and managing to talk Eagler down! I'm curious to see how it works out. Also, looking forward to chapter 3 of SI Book 3 :)
Kastor
2020-08-08 10:56:13 +0000 UTC