Masaki The Devourer II - Page 208 & 209
Added 2025-01-14 13:41:47 +0000 UTCThese pages keep getting wider and wider! Who's your favorite new girl in the line up? what do you think their backstory is and do you think they will have an arc in the future of the comic? Let's get a fun discussion going.
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Mostly the goth and the two girls on the left.
Goldent5
2025-01-15 17:05:29 +0000 UTCthe little gal?
GagaLadyLover
2025-01-15 13:04:46 +0000 UTCWhat a diverse line up, I’m curious to see if they’ll all have show up more later in the comic 👀 what is Katelyn planning to do with Ashley I wonder 🤔 Of the new characters, I like Ashley, the buff girl, Alex, and the girl in the blue yoga pants next to Alex
Volcom25
2025-01-15 01:16:00 +0000 UTCWow such a vast array of different shapes and sizes
UltraSpinkie
2025-01-14 23:17:30 +0000 UTCHopefully she'll get some meat on her bones. (Mostly her belly)
Goldent5
2025-01-14 17:39:26 +0000 UTCSounds good, let the side characters have some more attention.
M4773n
2025-01-14 16:51:18 +0000 UTCGlad to see the tall girl got some attention, which she does stand out the most on the lineup I guess. Unless we are looking at width. The dudes found out just now that they are trans. Against their will haha. Bro was desperate to find two more warm bodies to get 12 people. Also the two dudes and the muscle girl are part of Bros Body improvement club. Similar to the Mob Psycho body improvement club haha.
GagaLadyLover
2025-01-14 16:30:56 +0000 UTCGood good. Love the ideas. We have similar outlook on these girls. In the next part, I have some small side stories planned that can mix and match with different girls. Little side stories that relate to the main theme but don’t affect the main plot. Plenty of time to think about this but I will use the girls based on how people tend to react to them. They will be popping back up in the background and side lines as the stories goes
GagaLadyLover
2025-01-14 16:28:09 +0000 UTCI love where this going. I'm only talking about the womens that'll be good friends later and some well... not so much. I like the skinng girls but mostly the tall goth got my attention. She might have a massive glow up if consider eating as much. The creep is not it for me same goes for trans they aren't important. I feel like muscle girl is the only success trainer that did something but apparently too build. I can tell the three fatties are already good fat friends. Maybe add the skinny goth and the two skinny girls on the left. I guess the one on the right is least actracttive on the team being called potatoe head lol.
Goldent5
2025-01-14 15:20:29 +0000 UTCOkay, back to the gym and the other emergency. Bro's trying so desperately to give Katelyn something but she's still a stuck up, snobbish beach. My favourite girls in the line are Ashley, the muscled girl, I'd call her Jessica, Jess, the tiny with the flat chest, her name could be Bethany, Beth or Betty for short and the tall girl with the big and messy hair, Stephany, Steph for short. I can imagine these 4 totally different girls as best friends and a comic as they're talking and have to solve the everyday problems. As for their backstory, I told you, Ashley's a lazy nerd and her parents force her to go to the gym. Jess is a tomboyish energy bomb who prefers to solve problem with her fists and use her head as a hammer. Betty is a kind and sweet-hearthed girl who always think her friends first but very shy and ask for sorry for almost everything. She got bullied a lot and she's here to become stronger. As for Steph, she's a super genious nerd but extremely introvert and her parents hoped that she could make some friends at the gym. If you want to discuss about them more detail just DM me.
M4773n
2025-01-14 14:12:17 +0000 UTC
