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Chapter 353: The Pit

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Sometimes, sometimes not. In Watchmen, Dr. Manhattan could make clones and the one woman he was dating got mad when he made two of himself while in bed with her, and then REALLY mad when the third poked his head in from the other room where he'd been working. She took it as him not focusing on her, I think?

Logan Teague

Right ????? Think Madhatz got a little mixed up as lady Bai is from the frozen palace

chad osborn

Personally I like slice of life chapters. If I didn’t. Is just read a full on novel.

Luke Charles

I just realized that being able to make clones of yourself make dealing with a harem a lot easier.

Dovhat

There was a mistake a few paragraphs in saying the chasm was caused by a fight between Xiao Fang and the Duke instead of Xiao Nan.

Adam Boshcoff

Welcome back! Hope you had amazing holiday. Feedback: I feel like this chapter was a whole lot of nothing… just feels a bit let down after coming back from a 2 week break…. Sometimes I feel like we are falling into the usual Xianxia trap of fluff and filler chapters.

GloryHound

"Bai Wen: Disciple of the Wandering Wind" ...What???

Prometheus

Marrow really steals the spotlight for every chapter he is in. I mean, I understand that dog is the most important title and character and all, but it takes the spotlight from our poor Liu Jin… :p

Ewout

We always remember the big moments but it's the little things that keep you going. Eastern Port City nostalgia hitting hard

Woalol

"Bai Wen: Disciple of the Wandering Wind. Responsible adult. Someone has to be." The first part is incorrect.

foo-jin

Lovely chapter as always. And nice character descriptions that makes every fan of the story smile at the end. Looking forward to seeing the story develop in 2026. As as side note, I believe you miss worded who Bai Wen’s master is during the chapters character descriptions.

Jonathan Hemlin

FIRST COMMENT OF THE NEW YEAR BABY

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