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Sneak preview of spaceship rules for 5e!

Hey everybody!


I'm working on a new article series called Sailing the Astral Flow. The whole series will be released over 3 ~ 5 parts but I have the first part in a google doc today and would love feedback! One hazard when you have been thinking about an idea for a long time is that you might overlook writing something down because it's been in your head so long you forgot you haven't written it yet - so please check it out and let me know if you have any thoughts! Feel free to leave your comments directly on the google doc or here, whichever you prefer.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13DUdl-kk6chTVTThATH85nF4GKYtZ9ouH3QDNi_NltI/edit?usp=sharing

Sneak preview of spaceship rules for 5e!

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Oh, don't ever apologize for giving critique! I need that nitpicky feedback to make sure everything is up to par! You are absolutely right that the intended ruling was that a subsystem could only be operated by one creature on a given round. I will make that edit now!

Benjamin Huffman

The current preview rules limits subsystems to being used by one creature per turn. Since every creature has their own turn, wouldn't that make the rule obsolete? I think you meant to limit it to being used once per round. I'm not trying to be a nitpicking jerk here, just trying to help. I really love the direction this is going so far.

Neyd Harlequin


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