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Switching Proper Places (Part 3)

I'm really happy so far with the pace of this story. I've been reading some fantastic (non-stepford) writing by a few other creators lately, and it's something that I sorely needed to reinvigorate me and give me new ideas for my own work. Not cribbing ideas, but stuff like getting me to realize that a slower, more deliberately paced story could be the change I need to keep my interest in my own work up. 

I don't know how long this story is going to be, and I don't know the exact path it'll take, but I do know where it ends, and I'm really excited to keep writing it. If it gets too long, I'll start balancing it with other stories, but for now I'm happy with where it's going, and where Rory and Nina are heading as characters.

Specifically, I knew I wanted to give a good few chapters before we got to see the change which occurs in this chapter. I hope you enjoy!

Comments

excited to see nina prance out in a swell dress and blush as her man tells her to get to cleaning

Lamp

Thank you! I'm really hoping to make it special when Nina has the tables turned on her

Smokey

This pace is building my anticipation deliciously. Can’t wait to see Nina collared and gagged — I know it’ll be worth it when we do

vasily26


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