Those tentacles are a huge pain in the ass to render... it took about as long just to color them as it usually does to pencil a whole comic page. Either way, I hope you're all as excited for this upcoming story as I am. It's going to be a wild ride.
I've also attached the script again. Since the story hasn't started yet there's still time to edit it in case I get any really good suggestions; I've already changed it a bit to add some cool ideas that Patrons shared with me.