3.9 - Lost Bhoys [T1]
Added 2025-09-05 18:39:02 +0000 UTC9.
Wednesday, August 18
Comments
I'm sad now. You made me sad, Ted.
BelligerentGnu
2025-10-28 13:21:15 +0000 UTCBrutal, felt this ending in my stomach man... but it's tough, after doing his best to center himself on making the most money, even at the cost of 'destroying' the fun vibe at charlton, he still doesn't get the most money he can... brutal
Piras
2025-09-10 00:39:56 +0000 UTCDang. This is so heartbreaking ๐
Pashpash
2025-09-07 19:09:07 +0000 UTC"Um, nah, terrible, cut that."
Kanyau
2025-09-06 23:31:42 +0000 UTCYeah nick really did a number on him, with the money thing
hercule pyro
2025-09-06 19:47:26 +0000 UTCGemma makes a smokin' Chekov's gun.
Richard Carling
2025-09-06 18:08:16 +0000 UTCIt annoys me how often i have to comment here and applaud your writing. I like being a lurker. I love how you obey one of the principal rules of writing. Everything has a cost, and winning every battle diminishes that. So even when its crucial, you hand out a loss. Brilliant.
Jaydan Man
2025-09-06 15:12:29 +0000 UTCThat Prince confrontation was so good I had to read it aloud... twice. This one is going into the 'favourites', and I can't wait to hear it on audio. TYFTC!
Kanyau
2025-09-06 00:58:59 +0000 UTCReally great chapter. Consistent quality ted <3
James
2025-09-05 22:23:06 +0000 UTCI was gonna say heartbreaking butโฆ I was gonna say crushingโฆ I was gonna applaud the narrative chops. Letโs just go with โSuch is sport.โ All of the ups and downs, nailbiters and celebration. Class act as always.
Caerold
2025-09-05 22:19:01 +0000 UTCPhenomenal chapter
Mack
2025-09-05 20:52:06 +0000 UTCHe's getting too fixated on money. Which tbf not his fault but I had a feeling they would lose this one. Oh btw, could I suggest adding a transfer list (in/out + fee) along with the end of book numbers?
Uncle Snoo
2025-09-05 20:19:59 +0000 UTCHeartbreak at the end. So good though, such a good chapter.
Thomas
2025-09-05 19:20:07 +0000 UTC
