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3.2 - The First Win [T1]

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17 books in, and I have just now figured out that the champions league and the championship league are, in fact, two different leagues.

BelligerentGnu

If Max talked to Henry, Sebastian, Mateo, or MD about how there is this medical company that has a potential treatment for his mom that he wants to buy so he can get her into the trails they could tell him how wealthy people buy large assets. The do it buy leveraging their current assets to the maximum, using those loans to buy the asset they want, then refinancing so that they aren't over exposed. If Max gets to trouser ten million pounds from Saltney this year he can use those to buy assets that he can then take enough loans out against to purchase that medical company. I'm not sure if Max' financial risk tolerance will let him do that though.

Thomas

A way to limit this, without limiting clubs from smaller countries, would be to limit the loans allowed to a greater degree. So there is a chance they would opt for just excluding the minor states.

Richard Carling

Thanks for the much need spreadsheet. I wonder how long eufa business this will go on. Max won't have a monopoly on this for long others they will see Max and the young players at Bayern. To many will jump at it to make it free money for maxy then eufa will probably change the rules to kill the money scheme after a couple years

moldyolive

Phew. I was dreading another nervy game with Max as captain. Being honest, these types of "x event must get done in order to advance" chapters are my least favorite, but the Davey storyline addition helps maintain the emotional cohesion. Hopefully that makes sense and doesn't sound like a load of bullocks.

Galeg

I mean 'they clicked into a state of acting like they owned the place'.

Ted Steel

Not sure if this is a fix or by choice. Did you mean action instead of clicked into “acting”?

Riekko

The away fan's (not fans) reaction is funny. Histon once took three men and the proverbial/lyrical dog (Spot) to Barrow, but that takes the biscuit/prize.

Richard Carling

This chapter has all the best things: Spreadsheets and Convincing wins!

Geoff Urland

Yeah it's bewildering! But needed for the story, since it's Max's biggest scam. I think 'the standards' would be right, in football speak, but I agree that it's ugly so I've changed it. Thanks for the edits!

Ted Steel

Man, this Euro league qualification business is absolute nonsense. I can't wait for Max and Henri to be on the pitch together again, even as opponents. Edit suggestions: and the standards from you players was high -- standards -> standard or was -> were work on specific parts of a players' game -- players' -> player's

Tareq Malikyar

That flow chart gave me palpitations.

Wateesh

Fixed, thanks!

Ted Steel

Looks like a weird sentence in the second paragraph: "Here's about 50 just from just one of the clubs I was running. " -> "Here's about 50 just from one of the clubs I was running. "; removing the second "just" makes it look right to me.

Nathan


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