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2.12 - Don't Look Back In Anger [T1]

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Poor Pradeep. I know he is all kinds of messed up, and likely to become a villain, but the dude dropped his life savings to get there lol. He is obviously not neurotypical and likely lacks friends, and his closest companion is probably the system he has been working on. If he sells it out of desperation to a billionaire then he probably loses his life’s work for a fraction of the cost, and the fact is he isn’t too bad of a guy if he has been hacking bank accounts and yet is still poor as all hells

Fraser

Max needs to UP his cyber security. ASAP!

Kanyau

My dribbly winger was finally born

Logan Cole Adams

Finally all caught up! Thanks for the excellent chapter!

Erlost

This also feels like the perfect person to pair with Spectrum. He can keep mostly to the youth teams, but if he gets an idea, he can ping Pradeep to follow the thread from a different angle, giving a more complete picture

Crimson King99

Hindi word, in context, it would mean fun+good. Problem is, Pradeep is from Bangalore, and probably wouldn't talk like that (but maybe he moved from elsewhere)

nero

Max seems naive about Pradeep — I agree with his assessment but it’s like he hasn’t even considered that the guy might go to someone else and cause future problems.

Mack

He goes to Bradford, they survive this season, thrive thanks to his input, go up to the Championship next season and fight it out with Chester after their consolidation season.

Spider-Mannix

Pradeep’s storyline reads like an ominous villain origin story

MomoKokomo

"But what I have to offer is mast." Err... What?

Galeg

Thx for the chapter mate! It was loadsa fun!

Burna

The long-awaited catharsis--goodbye Bradford. I'm fully on Team Max in re Oasis; Wonderwall is actually a crime against the ears. If Pradeep truly doesn't know about the curse, I think I'd like a little bit more explanation as to why he wrote [System] with brackets in his e-mail in Inbox Zero. I didn't notice any typos except for potentially maxnanimous being more appropriate than maxnaminous. Have fun at the Euros, and as always, thanks for the wonderful writing!

Tareq Malikyar


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