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2.9 - Half and Half [T1]

9.

Monday, February 22

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As best I can figure with the dates, it's theoretically possible that George Best fathered Max Best.

BelligerentGnu

Still didn't use the Free Hit perk on the pen second time around. Max is compromised.

Richard Carling

Boat cat.

Froyo Baggins

Thanks, fixed those!

Ted Steel

Beautiful chappie

JaegerMaxim

Some WILD quotes in this one. 😂. 10/10 once again. TYFTC!

Kanyau

“Loads of little ships were bobbing up and down like Ryan Jack's CA.” You made me spit out my drink Ted. Pay up!

Ken

Thanks for the chapter! A little disappointed that we got imposter syndrome Max back, especially this late in the season, but I guess it makes sense leading up to his first time at Wembley. A couple of edit suggestions: "When they didn't tell the relatives," said Mikey, sitting up a fraction and jabbing his boney finger at me, "was that it was the bloody cat that did it!" -- When -> What No-one laughed. Bark said, "Well, that won that one thing." -- first that -> they

Tareq Malikyar

Another one: "Too many bruises. Too much pain. I stopped. Bent over. If I'd been a cat, I'd have licked my wounds." Max is Schrödinger's Cat.

Geoff Urland

Love this chapter! And at least two references to Max being feline - the "I should buy a boat" cat meme and Dean comparing him to the murder kitty. Interesting little coincidence.

Geoff Urland

Everyone, there's a red! Bounce! Bounce!

Ted Steel

The guy who wants to play striker and is off Max's wish list?

Ted Steel

Ha, right. I've added a bit to show that someone in the room knows that Max is wrong, even if the author doesn't!

Ted Steel

If theres one thing better than having an chapter about Exeter, its an episode of Plymouth losing. Thanks a lot Ted!

James

Great chapter, yada yada. Are you really just going to let us stew about Helge!?

MomoKokomo

The tension is killing me, is she or is she not preggers. Great chapter, good fun. I just hope Emma wasn't at a bar with George Best.

Thomas

not that it matters, but 100x 100 is 10,000 32x32 is 1024 which is the closest you can get to 1000 squares.

Ricky Kukowski


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