14.14 - Wanted
Added 2025-03-17 13:10:13 +0000 UTC[Thanks for all the support and feedback on
Comments
The love story between Max and Wales never disappoints.
Balthazard
2025-04-25 15:56:24 +0000 UTCI love Angel's character development, such a nice moment. Wonderful chapter!
Memoryofgold
2025-03-19 21:51:54 +0000 UTCThat hit in the feels so hard. I really needed that. The world feels so scary right now, but in Max, we can trust.
MomoKokomo
2025-03-18 01:26:01 +0000 UTC10/10 no notes. TYFTC!
Kanyau
2025-03-18 00:14:27 +0000 UTCBrennan Johnson isn't that bad aha
MXMentalStanderd .
2025-03-17 23:14:19 +0000 UTCAlso its very nice of him to - once again - acknowledge what a dick he was during their first meeting. Maybe that scores him some brownie points. I do love brooke and how she inserted herself into chester. Such a great character.
EducatedFool
2025-03-17 20:53:26 +0000 UTCThere is a good chance Max has created a straw man in his mind looking for enemies behind every shadow. Brooke never acknowledged Max's assumption, because I think you are dead right.
Tyler Jansen
2025-03-17 17:12:27 +0000 UTCWell that was an unedpected rollercoaster chapter!
Galeg
2025-03-17 16:22:52 +0000 UTCQuite right!
Caerold
2025-03-17 16:21:44 +0000 UTCThanks for another great chapter! Personally I don’t think Brooke and Zack leave like that. I feel like Brooke has shown a level of investment in Chester and England that she wouldn’t give up for more salary unless she wanted to be with family but that relationship hasn’t been fixed to make her abandon her career/new found happiness in England away from the existing pressures of her families business influence. Excited to see where this goes regardless.
Lorenzo Arreola
2025-03-17 16:05:41 +0000 UTCLovely ending to the chapter, Ted. And I did not see the Angel progression happening! Look how far she's come in 8 months, from throwing her toys out of the pram and trying to blackmail Max, to being the epitome of Chesterness and becoming a team player. And all it took was a mirror in Kit, to see who she becoming as a player, and going "yeahhh nah". 70k very well spent
Wesley Burr
2025-03-17 13:55:28 +0000 UTC
