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12.5 - Black and White

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And they did! Hurrah

Joshua Smith

That is motivational. Thanks Denshar! Of course I'll try to vary it somewhat.

Ted Steel

Meh i wouldn't care if the season ended up with the same, them starting shit and getting better for 12 more seasons, the characters and their improvement as Chester keeps climbing are what I enjoy (and player Max)

Denshar

Well if it makes you feel any better, they probably won't win the title this season. Just a promotion spot. But yeah, each extra season is 3 extra books. It will be challenging to keep a repeat season interesting. Unless he hands everything off to Sandra and goes on a season long side quest and we only get Chester progress in the background.

Uncle Snoo

I think that might be how the season goes, simply because that’s the plan - what you’ve described is what max is aiming for. Either that happens or we get like 6 books in league two! But I suspect that narrative focus of the football will be less about results and more “how can they be good without max”, which you can see has already been set up since the first games.

hercule pyro

I really hope that this season isn't just a repeat of the previous seasons where they start of shitty BUT emerge at the end victorious. I don't necessarily mind if that's the case, but if so, that can't be the focus of the story. We've seen it far too many times ATP.

Arash

When I asked for Sandra's partner to make an appearance, I didn't realize a monkey's paw would be involved. :P In all seriousness, it's actually kinda cool, if intensely worrying. I was thinking a cameo to find out what kind of person Sandra fell in love with, but this is a major, important side plot Also: fuuuuuuck, damn you getting me invested in a victory against a goddam *premier league* team!

BelligerentGnu

“Except Andrew Harrison” was very funny

hercule pyro

Excellent rage bait by I assume the imps.

Joppest

Cambridge will beat Wigan this weekend. Fact!

Ted Steel

I'm gutted that Chester will have a larger capacity than my team, even if it is for one season. Great chapter. I'm left wondering what he can do to narrow the gap with Nuke Hassle.

Richard Carling

Bosh chapter Gaffa

Fraser

Surprised there wasn't more of a fight needed to get that stadium expansion going.

Galeg

The emotional range of this chapter was awesome. Max has matured (but is still also his great full blown Maximizer self!)

Geoff Urland

Fuck me, that was worth the wait

Felix Skinner

Holy moly what a chapter!

Jake Lewis


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