12.1 - Full Spectrum Analysis
Added 2024-09-30 12:13:42 +0000 UTCPlayer Manager 12
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that's terrible, cut that as Max would say it lol
I Hl
2024-12-10 15:16:08 +0000 UTCYou mean we need the max embarrasses Raffi on the field Neymar style!
Enigmaniac
2024-10-01 06:11:33 +0000 UTCI think Johnny could do a job as a winger...running the lines. (Nah, bin that) Nice to have it "confirmed" by the curse that Pascal will only off training for six weeks. How quickly he gets match fit after that is another matter.
Richard Carling
2024-10-01 01:43:36 +0000 UTCYeah, we need the Max-Raffi eyelock on field.
BelligerentGnu
2024-09-30 20:07:30 +0000 UTCHa! It's too epic, I think.
Ted Steel
2024-09-30 19:23:46 +0000 UTCI think I'm getting older. Why is this chapter making me tear up man! Great chapter Ted
Silvertooth09
2024-09-30 19:19:11 +0000 UTCA) it's funny and good that the people around max spot his hypocrisy (good-naturedly) 2) I really enjoy how fully fledged max is as a character. Lots of first person web serial protagonists are just blank reader inserts so it's great that max actually has a really distinct personality (eg the way he's extremely not stoic about things like uncomfortable chairs, cables, and echo-y cabins) iii) if I were Brooke or zach (mainly zach) I would be pretty tired of my notoriously temperamental boss getting overly involved in my love life
hercule pyro
2024-09-30 17:58:32 +0000 UTCAnother super fun character-driven chapter. I loved learning about some of the soccer details that I'd never otherwise understand. And, of course, the fun tease at the end is generally better than another "I was completely wrong and should have worried" foreshadowing. And, lest I forget, I do love how far Spectrum has come from his very early days as a failing youth coach. So often we can take almost any supporting character you write and draw a line between now and 3-8 books back and see how natural their character development is. Top bins, mate.
Caerold
2024-09-30 15:08:56 +0000 UTCcan I just say, it'd be hilarious if you really did title it Bradford City and then skip the game to talk about the fallout or whatever.
Ricky Kukowski
2024-09-30 14:06:17 +0000 UTCLane lane and the spectroom put a smile on my face this morning.
BelligerentGnu
2024-09-30 13:42:44 +0000 UTC
