11.11 - Chesterslovakia
Added 2024-09-13 16:15:07 +0000 UTC11.
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Comments
Loved it. Nice one, Ted!
Sam McGuffin
2024-09-14 11:05:02 +0000 UTCOn the reread, it’s crazy how Max is micromanaging the team sheet as he’s dodging past national team standard players. He’s on the sauce for sure, the cheese sauce
Fraser
2024-09-13 23:09:44 +0000 UTCYes maybe I should write 'Bazant beer' so it's clear.
Ted Steel
2024-09-13 20:50:53 +0000 UTCGonna assume you meant Zlatý Bažant when you said bazant later down the chapter? Because just searching for the word on its own gets words like rookie, inexperienced, etc.
Droman
2024-09-13 20:24:33 +0000 UTCYou're half right.
Ted Steel
2024-09-13 20:07:06 +0000 UTCThanks! I think they had already qualified when I wrote the original Beth In Germany chapter and had no plans to take it this far. It was almost all organic to be honest. I wish I could plot that well! I try to let Max lead the story as much as poss.
Ted Steel
2024-09-13 20:06:44 +0000 UTCAtmospheric. I wished I could be there to see it. And then I was.
Richard Carling
2024-09-13 18:01:39 +0000 UTCSomeone there at the end was cutting a lot of onions for haluski.... Great chapter Ted! It looks like one of Max's challenges this season is keeping everyone (himself included) engaged through the first half of the season to realize the improvements they'll see over the second half
Geoff Urland
2024-09-13 17:20:44 +0000 UTCNeeded to take a bit to compose myself at the end too! Great chapter. Now I know why you picked Slovakia 😂
K
2024-09-13 17:06:43 +0000 UTCLove it. Can’t wait to see how dangerous Chester will be in January
Fraser
2024-09-13 17:04:48 +0000 UTC
