Extras - Being Fiona - What Could Have Happened - Part 2
Added 2024-05-07 05:08:03 +0000 UTCHere's the next part of what could have happened to Felix/Fiona before I revised the story.
A major part of the reason I abandoned this version of the story-line is that it got to the big moment too quick and then skipped over it.
So while in my current outline this milestone is now much further away, Felix is going to have much more agency in getting there, and a few additional stepping stones on the way.
Comments
Felix: "Dick? No. Tentacles maybe."
Senko
2024-05-07 20:43:26 +0000 UTCThis was a fun bit - I do agree with your comments on the last panel - this was like throwing someone in a pool to teach them to swim, and they are so intent on getting to a safe spot that they don't even think about trying to swim, it's pure panic mode. When Fiona hooked up with the shape shifter tom wolf guy, it was a lot more her initiative and she had the chance to enjoy the experience.
stevedore
2024-05-07 15:12:53 +0000 UTCI do like how Jess is the one initiating while controlling Felix, feels like that's the push he needs to try what he's so curious about deep down.
Cranzle
2024-05-07 09:33:41 +0000 UTC
