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Added 2024-06-23 03:16:47 +0000 UTCTo add on, how have you all found the fic so far? Anything that you expect more and for me to add in the next arc? What should I improve on more? What did you dislike?
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Loving the fic but I wish there was a wider variety of non dust weapons
SadBeater09
2024-06-23 14:02:38 +0000 UTCAct 1 was basically us being low fish and not really contending with things. Act 2 rises our wealth and fame but that comes with its enemies.
Pastah_Farian
2024-06-23 12:18:33 +0000 UTCReally liking the story so far but not really how the mc is coasting through life easily. Maybe add an antagonist in the form of die hard fanatical traditionalists who see the use of anything but dust to power their stuff as heretical. But then again I’m still liking where the story is going regardless.
Cesar gonzalez
2024-06-23 07:54:00 +0000 UTC
