Arc 1 Remastered
Added 2024-08-30 01:17:56 +0000 UTCArc 1 Remastered is available for all paid tiers.
Went through and re-edited Arc 1 with so many improvements. It reads a lot more like the recent chapters now. Also, I tried to clarify some points, deepened the influence Sabertooth, and tried to more clearly separate those moments from Tyson's base personality. Improved the flirting between Tyson and Jubilee and removed some of the creep factor. Also, I added a bit more of Tyson's perspective so that readers understand the decisions he made, and the reasoning behind them. There are no new scenes, but some new dialogue and jokes. This one will go up on the public sites at some point.
