Hetani 3 redesigns (pencils)

Thinking about that manga startup I posted last week.

I'd drawn the characters several years ago. Their designs haven't sat well with me recently, so I decided to bring them back to the design board. Character design is not one of my strengths, but I figure schoolgirls should be easy mode.

Well, that can probably be said about the whole high school setting in general.

Which reminds me, I should probably cover my ass from the get-go: For all legal purposes, these characters are over 18 years old. Even though they are all supposed to be early freshmen. I hope that should be comparatively believable in a fantasy that also features tank-built women who shoot highly nutritious non-fertile sperm out of their penises, and in which men have the anatomy to absorb said nutrition through their mouths and assholes to nourish themselves.

Ok, since that's over with, let's start with the guy. He's the one who needed to change the most.

# D

First off: Why he needs to exist. After all, aren't male protagonists the bane of all animes?

Well, yes. But also, there's that part of me that wants to get destroyed by the uncaring foot-long of a truck woman. And that's the thing: Rape is only fun when the female is the one doing the pummeling. Who else is going to get abused if he's not around? The shy girl? UNTHINKABLE.

Despite his blonde hair, he looked too much like a stock anime protagonist, which meant I fucking hated him. I guess, as a no-longer-adolescent, I can't be asked to identify with a kid who screams "nerdy" and "loser."

But see, while feminizing him makes him a lot more likable, it also puts me in a conundrum. He is supposed to be the bottom in the trio. And, since the girls' physique might be interpreted by weird people as "manly"... it might end up looking like I'm placing the "female" character in the submissive role. And I really hate that.

Because some time ago I discovered that my affinity for Futanari actually started as a subfetish. I love women, and measure the value of a man by his ability to pleasure his lady. But I have no idea know a vagina feels like. If I place a dick in a woman, I can much more easily fantasize about getting her drunk with maddening pleasure. It's stupid, but... I guess that doesn't stop it from being one of the foundations of my sexuality.

I want to sell the idea that he is a man. He identifies as one, and is a perfectly average specimen in the society he lives in. Of COURSE males need to wear skirts; how else would they attract the necessary nutrients only found in female sperm? Those who do not show, do not sell.

So anyway. He's supposed to be the stand-in for the audience. Let's dive into a matriarcal society whose very foundations rely on us serving women as cum dumps, and we have been stripped of any and all authority and urgency. He's male, but as far as possible from "anime protagonist" as feasible. Not clumsy, not a self-centered asshole, not the center of the harem, not powerful, reasonably adjusted, still the butt of most jokes. He's very much straight, which means he earnestly desires to get fucked up the ass by a virile girlcock like any healthy male of his age.

I haven't named him. "D" stands for "dude."

# Echy

Name is tentative. Lovely and clumsy ugu~ girl, generally the main character. She's a bit of an oddball in her society because, despite being a woman, she doesn't much care for exercise, is an utter pacifist and enjoys cooking vegan. Generally in fact, she enjoys the artisan, strength-irrelevant and non-violent labor that's usually reserved for men. (Including babysitting.) She does well in boy classes, but generally poorly in girl classes.

That being said, she suffers from a genetic condition that literally turns her into a viable heavyweight pro-wrestler, which sort of offsets her "masculine" side. Because she doesn't train however, her musculature is rather "obese" looking, which means it's round/curvy-looking. Though not as strong as a normal woman of her size, she is very large for a first-year highschooler, and having the theoretical potential to grow even wider if she actually trained. On the other hand, her penis is  somewhat reminiscent of a boy's in that it's a bit on the small side. Especially when flaccid.

(I decided that after drawing her dick, so I guess I'll have to adjust it later.)

This balance between male and female makes her popular not just among men, but also pops boners among women. She finds it difficult not to get thoroughly groped in crowded areas by strangers of both genders, and the headmaster soon authorizes a club (unbeknownst to her) whose only activity is to plan and execute ways to rid her of her panties.

She's shy but extroverted. She's somewhat insecure, which is why she uses the "conservative" version of the school's uniform. (For all that's worth.) That said, she "accidentally" loses her panties one way or another every day, which is why she always walks home with her penis basically exposed. (As pictured.) It's not that rare for her to lose her skirt as well.

By the end of the first semester, this has resulted in her growing numb to the prospect of waving her genitals in public, so for the rest of her education, she just does it casually. She is very conscious of her breasts, however, because she is not aware that her uniform is designed to offer glimpses of them too. In the picture above, she's trying to hide her boobies by lifting her shirt, but she hasn't realized that it's so small, she has inadvertently exposed her nipples from below. After all, her pecs hide them from her view due to their sheer size.

In this way, she manages to be an extremely modest girl despite her perpetually exposed, rock-hard, moist veiny dick.

Despite her pure heart, she has a very aggressive sexuality, which translates into a lot of difficulty holding back her libido. It's normal for women in this world to go feral after tortuous prolonged sexual restraint, but Echy's hyperfeminine pheromones trigger it much earlier than normal. If she doesn't ejaculate at least twice every day, someone gets raped. Hard.

She believes in the power of love, which is why her pussy has seen plenty of use. Persistent intercourse with females eventually turns her bisexual.

# Pai Zuri

Pai is a bit more of a window to a rough view of the characters' female society. Although she is more of an alpha female rather than an average Jane.

She is a bodybuilding maniac, casual serial rapist, meat lover and advanced wrestler. She trains religiously and excessively, which yields a slick and angular physique. She is wider than Echy, but also shorter (although that's not saying much). She compensates for it by wearing ridiculous high heels that cause lots of real estate damage.

Speaking of her costume, her egotistical personality leads her to wear the slutty variant of the uniform, although she customizes it in places, skirt department in particular. Ever heard of a skirt that's so micro, it's practically a belt? Well, she takes the concept to its purest form. In the picture, she is wearing her day-to-day "skirt."

She infers tremendous pride from her impractically-endowed gonads. It's not really common for people in this world to provide sneak peeks of their assets (beyond what you can normally see under every skirt), but Pai is fully on-board with plastering her dick all over everyone's memories and faces, letting everybody know that her dick is just the biggest. Although men are flabbergasted by its majesty, it takes a maniac to actually want to get harassed by its sheer size.

Which actually works fire for her, because she's actually a lesbian.

The logic behind this is that she is too girly to appreciate the comfort of an easy hunt. She needs to employ her strength while fucking, and men just don't provide the framework for that. Hell, untrained men actually have to go through rehabilitation after getting porked by her. And this is why she finds herself inhabiting other girls' pussies more often than normal.

And this explains a few things: Her infatuation with Echy, her admiration for herself, her exhibitionism towards women and her obsession with wrestling. Combatants are allowed to fuck their opponents after defeating them, you see, and this is not considered gay because wrestling is a girly girl's sport, and who wouldn't get horny after a needlessly nude, tact-rich, sweaty, frotty, rabid display of raw power and sinew, right? So Pai works extra hard, not to earn the prize money, but to score those splashy girl-to-girl mind-numbing pheromone-fueled shower-not-allowed widely-broadcasted fucks.

Not that homosexuality is panned by their society, but Pai hasn't come out of the closet yet.

She doesn't get very good grades outside of sports, but she is also the president of the get-rid-of-Echy's-panties club.