Clothing Requistion Part 4 - Finished Art
Added 2024-03-13 13:39:51 +0000 UTCMeet D.A.V.E. ๐
On a side note, I have to say this sequence seems to be going for longer than I originally envisioned. I originally envisioned pantsing day - I didn't envision Dave! But these things always seem to take on a life of their own. They never turn out like I think at first. Never!
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The layout of the speech bubbles in that panel was a bit tricky, yeah. I wanted a closeup of D.A.V.E. but putting speech bubble interchange from two different characters around it was an interesting challenge. I'm not super happy with it either, but for the moment I'm not sure I have a better solution - other than redraw the pane, but that's not something I'm going to do right now. Maybe the future...? Who knows But yeah, glad you like him! The concept made me chuckle so I thought I'd just go with it!
Stripped Comic Art
2024-03-13 23:06:11 +0000 UTCOh I like D.A.V.E ๐ I like the smiley face speech bubble on panel 5, as if he wasn't a smiley face himself ๐ But something looks off on panel 7 ๐ค the first reply from Penny looks strange, as if he said something weird and she's embarrassed like "what a nice panties you have there" ๐ And Penny's speech bubbles connecting through D.A.V.E's looks a bit strange (in my opinion) ๐ And finally, that's a cute bra Penny has there, she seems to take care of matching her undies ๐
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