Big Sis' Fury
Added 2023-02-10 19:34:51 +0000 UTC"How dare you hurt my Sister, Human!''
Good idea to stay out of the water
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thanks! really glad you like it, I've had this story swim ''heh'' around in my head for a couple of years now actually, I'm really glad to finally have had it put out there. I'm also just happy with the positive reception I know supporters don't come here for the feels
Annon
2023-02-14 00:20:08 +0000 UTCHonestly, the narrative you've spun here with so few words is rather nice! It comes together very well through the expressions and limited vocabulary, and its use of colors has generally been an aid to the creation of these pieces. It's been an excellent exercise to see all of this in terms of non-verbal, visual storytelling and in the work on character expressiveness. A well spun tale so far, all put together.
Artorius
2023-02-11 11:17:25 +0000 UTCHe can’t hear her so this is actually a very Dangerous situation
annonfan224
2023-02-10 21:36:23 +0000 UTCkinda to show that time is running out for the character who has to leave like the setting sun
Annon
2023-02-10 20:48:22 +0000 UTCWell good to see Adagio cares in her own way...even if it's less than effective. Why did you make the background a sunset?
Spillthefire6
2023-02-10 20:35:09 +0000 UTCNow she has to learn sign language so she can threaten him.
Spillthefire6
2023-02-10 20:32:53 +0000 UTCHer hair also still looks great
Orm
2023-02-10 20:11:36 +0000 UTCSometimes the only thing scarier than a woman scorned is said woman’s friends and family
meepsalot
2023-02-10 19:57:10 +0000 UTCAdagio was certain that her threat would put the fear of the deep into [undefined]. She didn't understand he was deaf and missed her threats entirely.
C. Snacks
2023-02-10 19:45:28 +0000 UTCNot gonna lie, she looks cute even while she's mad.
Orm
2023-02-10 19:36:30 +0000 UTCUh-oh
Bfan
2023-02-10 19:36:03 +0000 UTC
