Box Request - Sunset Spotting Pink
Added 2021-12-08 18:46:14 +0000 UTCFirst time sunset noticing her hair turning pink.
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The stories of this universe are here https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1_WC5SKBrHsI1LtwQuquJOsz19qtTjZwB8uYth1ATtiI/edit?usp=sharing If some of the links don't work, you need to simply use the waybackmachine with the link
Annon
2021-12-09 15:27:18 +0000 UTCIt's more like my own tendency towards vanilla, transformation and character-focused stuff in this lends me t slow-burn and stuff that feels right for the characters being transformed, and Sunset maintaining a semblance of herself and struggling against this foreign magic, even if she's losing the battle, is very much in character for her and creates an interesting story. It's the kind of thing I'll probably tend to focus on in my requests, beyond showing forms and moments that don't usually get the love they need, like 0.5 or 1.5 stuff and other character/story beats. Plus the element of tragedy just also adds a nice little emotional element to it, and it gives me some ideas for post 2.0 Sunset.
Artorius
2021-12-09 03:05:49 +0000 UTCThis is really great to follow; the loose storyline here is fantastic. There isn’t some written story I haven’t read, is there?
Z
2021-12-08 22:07:20 +0000 UTCThanks again for the feedback. yeah it's just fun to see how the characters try to rationalize their actions, like her and big mac just needed something to focus etc. It does also help to fill out things like a puzzle piece like you said. Regardless was fun.
Annon
2021-12-08 20:44:06 +0000 UTCLike going Gray, but earlier.
snakebit1995
2021-12-08 20:44:00 +0000 UTCJust be careful not to get addicted to the slow burn. Otherwise you'll start looking for excuses to drag it out even more.
Bfan
2021-12-08 19:39:43 +0000 UTCI appreciate seeing someone else's comments on how damn good sunsets slow burn is
BioYuGi
2021-12-08 19:30:08 +0000 UTCReally enjoy how this one turned out. I didn't imagine much how the scene would be set, indeed I'd even considered she'd be alone when she saw it, but it being at a point post-climax really helps to make the moment hammer home more; she sees it just as she finishes with an act that represents how far she's fallen to the magic and how much it's changed her despite her attempts t o resist. It's one of the reasons I do enjoy Sunset as it presents an interesting dynamic for her transformation, even if it is also much more upfront about the wa these people are being transformed (which, hey, is good for more story/character focused stuff). It's really nice to see this moment, probably a real wake-up call for Sunset, and helps kind of fill out a previously missing place in her arc. Next time something like this comes up, I'll try to think of something similarly interesting for the story/characters. Really good work on the choices in how to depict this annon. The only thing I'd say is that, while the stunned, post-coital shock is a good choice, I think a slightly more emotional response might've also been a good choice. Mild panic, realization, etc., etc,., but that's more just other potential opportunities.
Artorius
2021-12-08 19:14:21 +0000 UTCYeah very interesting to see her in both takes
Annon
2021-12-08 19:13:30 +0000 UTCYeah, it seems to me like Sunset never really accepts the transformation and, even at the end, is subconsciously fighting it even as the magic pretty much overwhelms her and forces her to her 2.0 state. The idea that Mirror Sunset is her if she accepted it from the beginning is an interesting one, as it suggests that having resisted the magic ended up exacerbating the transformation. It's a really nifty idea that continues to play into the cool, slightly spooky themes that surround Sunset.
Artorius
2021-12-08 19:07:57 +0000 UTCYeah they're my favorites for that reason.
BioYuGi
2021-12-08 19:02:17 +0000 UTCSunset and Sci-Twi both hold a special place regarding slow-burn transformation. Was pointed out that Sunset noticing the changes and accepting them are two different things entirely however. So lots of wiggle-room for different experiences
Annon
2021-12-08 19:00:36 +0000 UTCOh this is an extremely hot concept for a Sunset picture, her hair representing the point of 2.0 was brilliant. Gosh, slut, I wonder if it's all the dick making you oblivious to your constantly growing tits and skimpier tops?
BioYuGi
2021-12-08 18:53:46 +0000 UTC
