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Book 5 cover

The cover for Book 5 is finally finished!

I'm considering a few changes—like removing the cockroach, zooming in on Nat, and adjusting the layout. It's something I'll decide later based on what I like the most.

On the cover, you can see Lissandra, the black mana dagger, the dagger made from Saint Absolute’s flesh and bones, with the 5th floor Champion’s eye imbued into it. And more!

While it’s not 100% lore-accurate—Nat has too many arms, Flamebearer could be more damaged, and there are some other small details—I’m really happy with how it turned out!

P.S.: Plz, no spoilers.

Book 5 cover

Comments

I like it just the way it is!

kyle

Smatch.

Julien Fellegara

Love it. My only gripe is Lis needs more muscle

Noblessejav

I smashed my phone a few days ago by leaving it on the car... all I cared about was my patreon...

Mark Bullock

Why is there a bug on my screen?

Gwalmeich

Well if it's possible it'd be a nice reference him having an evil orb or two likely bc he forgot about them

Rocotrap

Make Liss wear her suit, this version feels kinda underwhelming to her imao

Flippu

Is that a Jojo reference?

Lee Joseph Rosales

Yeah, I like your point about Liss being relaxed. When they fought, she was partially disciplining an unruly student and partially testing his abilities. I never got the impression she was fighting seriously even though Nat gave everything he had. It'd be hard to convey all that in a single picture but making her more casual would help.

zoarian

I personally think, that if the cockroach is kept on the cover, that making her seem even more relaxed is a bit better foreshadowing. Also, nat being as serious as he looks here, with Liss being really calm and leaning back could signify that she is noooot worried at all

Marijn Borrenbergs

When you look at this angle it doesn't prepare you for the complete *ss whoop trashing she gave him hahaha

Felipe Reis

Where is the concept art posted?

David McCreight

Love it, the concept art sketch is a close second though

nixytrixy

I feel like the crown looks a bit boring. I was envisioning it with only three finials at the front

Larry L

I feel like Nat does not look smug enough.

arnumart

Pity, the art looks very good!

Tsorov

I think the way she's holding the dagger is a little weird. I'd imagine she'd be holding it loosely, maybe even having the tip pointing down. That pose looks like she's trying to shank Nat.

Sean

I feel like the mana should look more solid. Both the arm and the crown. But i guess that just my headcannon. Nice artwork. .

11335577

Yeah, remove Lissandra and add Biscuit.

Alex

Make the eye on the dagger look straight at the reader.

Arnon Parenti

Liss looks short and young on it. Like 16 yo. Not early 30s but perfect body. Great pic though. Forgot about the white hair.

Poutine Au Syrop d'érable

Add in evident of staying awake for days as well his hair is nice and he would not care about that.

Augustus

The picture is great, I love it. I agree with the improvement points you wrote too. I could add that the mana crown could be a little more like a halo with a futuristic style. Also some runes on the left arm and the weapons.

Huseyin Yagli

Yeah cut out lissandra... she comes back anyway ;)

tost

Yeah cut out lissandra... she comes back anyway ;). In that case it would be more generic and fitting to more parts from the book. Also im not sure but the mana pointer finger seems too long compared with the other hand but maybe it's my imagination. The arm is really good, doesn't need flesh anyway.

tost

the artist is incapable of making Nat not look handsome

anonymous patreon

the artist is too busy for me to commission it unfortunately

anonymous patreon

I cannot imagine a more HDT quote than: *Nat has too many arms*. Like.. how dare he have a flesh and blood appendage, doesnt he know mana is superior?

13L00D13ANE

I also really like how the artist made Nat's Mana arm in this work.

ShockedCorgi

ohh okok thanks! For some reason i assumed his eyes were the same color due to the mana wavelength iris.

Akshay Avala

I love it! If I had to make a suggestion I would ask to make Nat a little haggard looking or crazed, that would add a little suspense while also being more cannon.

ShockedCorgi

Can we exchange the cockroach with an actual cockroach, with both her blades? Just for the jokes of course, probably not as the official cover, but for our inside Patreon joke?

Tsorov

Nat has heterochromia!

Nerø

Nice!

Cnote

Awesome! The sketch shall be missed.

James Cutter

are nat’s eyes supposed to be heterochromatic? or is it just the lighting

Akshay Avala


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