Book 5 cover
Added 2025-01-02 15:15:59 +0000 UTC
The cover for Book 5 is finally finished!
I'm considering a few changes—like removing the cockroach, zooming in on Nat, and adjusting the layout. It's something I'll decide later based on what I like the most.
On the cover, you can see Lissandra, the black mana dagger, the dagger made from Saint Absolute’s flesh and bones, with the 5th floor Champion’s eye imbued into it. And more!
While it’s not 100% lore-accurate—Nat has too many arms, Flamebearer could be more damaged, and there are some other small details—I’m really happy with how it turned out!
P.S.: Plz, no spoilers.
I like it just the way it is!
kyle
2025-01-12 18:50:23 +0000 UTC
Smatch.
Julien Fellegara
2025-01-05 02:02:54 +0000 UTC
Love it. My only gripe is Lis needs more muscle
Noblessejav
2025-01-03 19:51:25 +0000 UTC
I smashed my phone a few days ago by leaving it on the car... all I cared about was my patreon...
Mark Bullock
2025-01-03 17:45:22 +0000 UTC
Why is there a bug on my screen?
Gwalmeich
2025-01-03 16:51:34 +0000 UTC
Well if it's possible it'd be a nice reference him having an evil orb or two likely bc he forgot about them
Rocotrap
2025-01-03 16:01:56 +0000 UTC
Make Liss wear her suit, this version feels kinda underwhelming to her imao
Flippu
2025-01-03 15:17:16 +0000 UTC
Is that a Jojo reference?
Lee Joseph Rosales
2025-01-03 13:56:33 +0000 UTC
Yeah, I like your point about Liss being relaxed. When they fought, she was partially disciplining an unruly student and partially testing his abilities. I never got the impression she was fighting seriously even though Nat gave everything he had. It'd be hard to convey all that in a single picture but making her more casual would help.
zoarian
2025-01-03 11:45:02 +0000 UTC
I personally think, that if the cockroach is kept on the cover, that making her seem even more relaxed is a bit better foreshadowing. Also, nat being as serious as he looks here, with Liss being really calm and leaning back could signify that she is noooot worried at all
Marijn Borrenbergs
2025-01-03 06:25:02 +0000 UTC
When you look at this angle it doesn't prepare you for the complete *ss whoop trashing she gave him hahaha
Felipe Reis
2025-01-02 22:26:58 +0000 UTC
Where is the concept art posted?
David McCreight
2025-01-02 20:38:47 +0000 UTC
Love it, the concept art sketch is a close second though
nixytrixy
2025-01-02 19:15:47 +0000 UTC
I feel like the crown looks a bit boring. I was envisioning it with only three finials at the front
Larry L
2025-01-02 19:06:52 +0000 UTC
I feel like Nat does not look smug enough.
arnumart
2025-01-02 17:10:29 +0000 UTC
Pity, the art looks very good!
Tsorov
2025-01-02 16:50:48 +0000 UTC
I think the way she's holding the dagger is a little weird. I'd imagine she'd be holding it loosely, maybe even having the tip pointing down. That pose looks like she's trying to shank Nat.
Sean
2025-01-02 16:41:40 +0000 UTC
I feel like the mana should look more solid. Both the arm and the crown. But i guess that just my headcannon. Nice artwork. .
11335577
2025-01-02 16:18:08 +0000 UTC
Yeah, remove Lissandra and add Biscuit.
Alex
2025-01-02 16:14:56 +0000 UTC
Make the eye on the dagger look straight at the reader.
Arnon Parenti
2025-01-02 15:39:24 +0000 UTC
Liss looks short and young on it. Like 16 yo. Not early 30s but perfect body.
Great pic though. Forgot about the white hair.
Poutine Au Syrop d'érable
2025-01-02 15:31:20 +0000 UTC
Add in evident of staying awake for days as well his hair is nice and he would not care about that.
Augustus
2025-01-02 15:28:22 +0000 UTC
The picture is great, I love it. I agree with the improvement points you wrote too. I could add that the mana crown could be a little more like a halo with a futuristic style. Also some runes on the left arm and the weapons.
Huseyin Yagli
2025-01-02 15:27:59 +0000 UTC
Yeah cut out lissandra... she comes back anyway ;)
tost
2025-01-02 15:27:45 +0000 UTC
Yeah cut out lissandra... she comes back anyway ;). In that case it would be more generic and fitting to more parts from the book. Also im not sure but the mana pointer finger seems too long compared with the other hand but maybe it's my imagination. The arm is really good, doesn't need flesh anyway.
tost
2025-01-02 15:27:40 +0000 UTC
the artist is incapable of making Nat not look handsome
anonymous patreon
2025-01-02 15:24:58 +0000 UTC
the artist is too busy for me to commission it unfortunately
anonymous patreon
2025-01-02 15:23:35 +0000 UTC
I cannot imagine a more HDT quote than: *Nat has too many arms*. Like.. how dare he have a flesh and blood appendage, doesnt he know mana is superior?
13L00D13ANE
2025-01-02 15:22:25 +0000 UTC
I also really like how the artist made Nat's Mana arm in this work.
ShockedCorgi
2025-01-02 15:22:23 +0000 UTC
ohh okok thanks! For some reason i assumed his eyes were the same color due to the mana wavelength iris.
Akshay Avala
2025-01-02 15:21:46 +0000 UTC
I love it! If I had to make a suggestion I would ask to make Nat a little haggard looking or crazed, that would add a little suspense while also being more cannon.
ShockedCorgi
2025-01-02 15:20:59 +0000 UTC
Can we exchange the cockroach with an actual cockroach, with both her blades? Just for the jokes of course, probably not as the official cover, but for our inside Patreon joke?
Tsorov
2025-01-02 15:20:57 +0000 UTC
Nat has heterochromia!
Nerø
2025-01-02 15:19:54 +0000 UTC
Nice!
Cnote
2025-01-02 15:18:35 +0000 UTC
Awesome! The sketch shall be missed.
James Cutter
2025-01-02 15:18:22 +0000 UTC
are nat’s eyes supposed to be heterochromatic? or is it just the lighting
Akshay Avala
2025-01-02 15:18:07 +0000 UTC