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必須進行隱蔽處理(馬賽克)的部位例 ・生殖器或者可聯想到生殖器的部位 ・生殖器結合部位以及插入部位 ・肛門結合部位以及插入部位 ・詳細描寫並過度強調肢體截斷,或是傷口,斷面的部位 讓我思考一下...

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Love your art, just hope you don’t forget the context. Even with dreams or fantasies, scenes need weight. That’s what I liked about Nishida’s early work, it went beyond the scenes. Like in Marín's previous work, it's NTR but her attitude makes it feel vanilla. P.S. Personally, Asuna acting too loose kills the impact of the NTR for me. I’m not saying this about this specific work, but overall it's starting to give me that impression. No criticism, just my opinion.

Astrokik

又是做梦吗.....ε=(´ο`*))) 能给克莱因篇做个续吗,想看asuna纠结堕落做到最后

乌行时雨

I think it will be her imagination and she will wake up being carried home by Nishida and he will "take care" of her heheh

JePreto

This is gonna be another of Kirito's dreams, isn't it? Lol

Ginger Soul

太粗暴了太过分了太兴奋了!

PSYMOON

側面看耳飾真的太瑟了🤤好有感覺(話說老師可以考慮加個亞絲娜和醉漢衣物脫落在床邊的分鏡嗎,會更有感覺的樣子✨v✨)

亞絲娜醬

Hopefully we get better angles too, like more of the close up pov angles, this person's good at them.

KetariTOT9

神中神,如果有丝袜就更棒了

brove2

The idea of Asuna being sexually frustrated is fine, but I'm not entirely convinced by using that as a justification for her giving in. Her resistance should always take precedence, or she should be forced into it one way or another, otherwise a lot of the atmosphere is lost.

Astrokik

醉漢🤤🤤🤤🤤 又一神作。老師的作品真係每次都會震撼到我。

K3

Maybe a scene where the drunk man offers help to Asuna with a playful flirtation and Asuna shyly accepts because of her frustrated sexual desire... <3<3<3

waton54

讚同!!接下來的劇情可能是因為意外跟陌生人做愛導致亞絲娜懷孕,又或者是亞絲娜跟桐人終於成功懷孕,但是亞絲娜因為這次意外私底下還偷偷跟醉漢保持聯繫偷情🤩 就是因為這種不確定性才讓人對老師的作品上癮,本身同人作品就是架空世界,發生一點意外完全沒什麼問題0w0

亞絲娜醬

神作預定,無論是醫生還是醉漢的劇情都令人非常期待!!跟陌生人做愛,沉淪性欲的亞絲娜,讚!!

tzsnuhc

希望老師可以按照自己的想法把劇情畫下去,不被別人的想法左右。優秀的作品離不開精彩的劇情,任何充滿隨機性的劇情都會讓人產生期待的想法,如果只固定在同一種劇情框架內反而不利於創作~老師加油☺️

亞絲娜醬

感覺接下來的劇情應該很有意思,期待(✧∇✧)

亞絲娜醬

If that man is just any man, I'm really disappointed. There's no beauty in behaving like that to any man.

tiga

One can hope, but I think it's just a random drunk guy.

AxN

who's that guy nishida?

ジェラルド 2

nice

yydsaa

Damn, that took a turn REAL fast, lol

Ginger Soul

是因為那張帶斷層面的圖片,海苔沒打的緣故嗎😵

亞絲娜醬

fanbox的規則也太嚴格了,感覺老師打的海苔已經挺多的了,居然還會被警告😨

亞絲娜醬

打码太多了吧,呜呜呜

yydsaa

做愛可以,接吻不行

ManOfCulture2077

wowowow

yydsaa

fingering scene was gone.

ジェラルド 2

期待!

俺也一样

i would like to see ALO Asuna (undine) doujinshi asuna getting fuck by yuuki guild members " tecchi and talken "

ジェラルド 2

剛發現亞絲娜戴耳釘的設定回歸了誒(戴耳釘在克萊因時期)要是可以保留這個設定就好了,總感覺有些莫名的澀澀🤤如果以前的白色高跟鞋也可以回歸就更好了

亞絲娜醬

亞絲娜好耶!是關於懷孕的題材,希望會有孕肚做愛的劇情😍老師辛苦了

亞絲娜醬

希望加上桐人陪同 然后用帘子遮住视线

黄小鲤

老师是性欲的神下凡人间!

PSYMOON

神作確定!! 醫院藥物最多,有機會用上迷幻藥? 媚藥? 很期待劇情。 不過老師注意休息,身體健康才能製作更多亞總造福世人。

K3

一定要檢查口腔🤤

K3

希望能看到娜总的口腔检查

鸡翅子

waku waku

橙風之秋

太可愛了!

billycheng526

HELL YEAH MORE ASUNA!!!!

wrgrblldp

看來老師又要出神作了,非常期待接下來的發展

Mark Chin

ASUNA

General Lee

希望還能看到老師畫愛蜜莉雅

louiechen0105

熬夜党总是冲在亚总第一线!!

brove2


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