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關於翻譯的問題... 抱歉,我實在沒把握能翻譯出我想要的意思 所以目前來說是不會有翻譯的 抱歉... ---------------------------------- 謝謝大家的支持與留言 雖然很想直接說出結局...但是還是請大家等我一下吧 我只能說 英文跟中文的留言的大家都是對的...0V0 ----------------------------------------- 謝謝大家m(_ _)m 目前就先這樣吧 下一篇有點想畫戀上換裝娃娃的海夢0.0

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Comments

睡衣真的太香,我想起很早期和克萊恩的劇情🤤

K3

老師您辛苦了,希望老師您有空可以多畫幾張亞絲娜睡衣的圖,這套睡衣太色了~非常喜歡😍

亞絲娜醬

今天重新回味一下這篇才發現這裡也更新了~新圖好高清呀可以放大看亞絲娜迷離的小表情,太可愛了😚感謝老師

亞絲娜醬

Please English version. Chinese is too difficult to translate.

tiga

难道0次是桐人认知里面的次数嘛,,其实嘛两个人已经。。。。

白日梦啊哈哈哈

希望以后能看到亚和桐人的纯爱😍

Asuna

很想看亞跟桐人的純愛本😍

billycheng526

都係,設定係發夢的話,可以有更多不同效果😂

K3

I hope you continue making it only a dream it’s fun to see all the scenarios

mmm

老師,西田4有沒有可能今年會推出, 超期待的~ 感謝老師帶來的神劇情, 希望西田可以突破0次😆

DK

太好了!!🥺謝謝老師(✧∇✧)獻上我的感謝! 我已經準備好💰隨時準備開通😊,希望老師可以盡快把無文字版提上日程🥺迫不及待了 最後非常感謝老師你的回復!!非常喜愛老師作品的畫風,我會一直支持你的!!🥰🥰🥰

亞絲娜醬

其實是我的話...我會讓西田繼續作夢... 反正他在想什麼都看的到阿0V0

鬼鳴らす(羞恥度拋棄中)

你這樣讓我好想說出設定阿阿阿阿 但是...嗚嗚嗚嗚 說出來瞬間可能就破梗了0V0|||

鬼鳴らす(羞恥度拋棄中)

約會之後太混亂了就沒看了 只能看看之後有沒有心動的角色

鬼鳴らす(羞恥度拋棄中)

yes 細節之後會補

鬼鳴らす(羞恥度拋棄中)

我去看了,很不錯!! 本來是想要把乾紗壽葉補完之後接上海夢的劇情 現在要重新思考一下了

鬼鳴らす(羞恥度拋棄中)

每個留言我都有看,就是不好回應就是了... 不過無文字版我可以用看看

鬼鳴らす(羞恥度拋棄中)

0次是為了走更長遠的路

Jay

i hope you do agil story or alo asuna version undine

ジェラルド 2

夢か……しかしきっとクラインならやってくれる

やっくん

please give us a translated version sensei!

Kiritooow

Gorgeous work ❤️

Ekidastre

海夢🤤

K3

期待海夢!有考慮約會大作戰嗎,剛好最近出第五季了🤣

moe

0次,难道上一篇也是幻想吗

465ddd

老師筆下的角色畫起來都是栩栩如生,太愛了🤤

亞絲娜醬

希望老師能夠看見🥺

亞絲娜醬

另外想問一下老師有興趣再開高一檔的贊助嗎?內容可以放無文字遮擋的差分圖片,個人性癖喜歡看無文字的圖片自己腦補內容(不知道有沒有同好) 西田2的第32張圖片亞絲娜捂嘴的表情被文字遮擋到了好遺憾,雖然能猜到當時老師在創作的時候應該是先上傳沒有文字遮擋的圖片,但是當時還沒有關注老師...錯過了TWT 總之希望老師能再開一檔贊助上傳西田1-2-3部的無文字遮擋的純享版圖片,我一定第一時間贊助支持!!🙏🏻拜託了老師🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

亞絲娜醬

完结撒花!!虽然没有看到睡衣大战很遗憾,但是水手服漏乳的亚丝娜还是好看的!大赞😆

亞絲娜醬

海夢嗎?!?! 前幾天看了Deliriumベア@NTR老師的海夢動畫超色的! 也開始期待老師筆下的海夢會多色了🤤

LaSaMeYa

Hope it gets translated :/

mmm

Oh damn

mmm

He's thinking about drawing Marin from Bisque Doll

casualove

海梦好阿。别想了哈哈哈。谢谢老师。

casualove

目前就先這樣吧 下一篇有點想畫戀上換裝娃娃的海夢0.0 What does this mean?

mmm

🫶

mmm

向西田先生賠罪

堀江 長月

由於太突如其來,錯手重擊了西田, 故事一:事後感到內疚,答應西田任何要求,最後都是夢😂 故事二:西田耍蠱惑,受傷後裝暈,趁亞絲娜不為意用廁所毛巾令她短暫窒息暈到,之後一系列操作並拍照和錄影留念,並作日後使用🤤

K3

more asuna sensei

legendkun2

老師畫的馬尾太好看了。 期待再來大戰一場

K3

老师再给几p吧😭

是一夜七次郎WWW

nello

哇奥 再大战三百回合吧

黄小鲤

Next time, please give me a creampie from Naoba! Teacher!

カイジ

老師畫的亞絲娜真的是太棒了 希望還有後續

death1011

還有後續嗎😍😍😍

billycheng526

西田又有借口可以爽了🤣

亞絲娜醬

情趣睡衣加人妻发型,我先立为敬🤤

亞絲娜醬

I HOPE NISHIDA SUCKS THE FUCK OUTTA THAT BREAST

Ancestorm

OMG This is a damn roller coaster ride.

Ginger Soul

Omgomgomg Asuna with her side braid ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Ekidastre

亞絲娜把西田的老二拔下來了 盜懶覺集團

yourvampire

I find it funny that she’s casually dressed in lingerie and is carrying a dildo in the restroom knowing the old man is sleeping over lol

mmm

Oh damn I thought the story was over 🧐

mmm

居然是被假屌巴頭嗎?!?! 笑死🤣

LaSaMeYa

換個角度想⋯ 就算真的是一場夢⋯ 問題是這夢也太完整,想想還是很爽啊😆

LaSaMeYa

西田大叔的调情小妙招好多,先是第二部让亚丝娜求着插入,然后第三部又是让亚丝娜扮成女儿求插入,虽然结尾是梦但我总感觉是西田跟上次一样内射完事之后又爽晕过去了🤣 看完第三部又重温了第二部,想问一下老师第二部第32张图的桐姥爷分镜是不是可以缩小一点或者单独放一行,把亚丝娜捂嘴的样子放出来会不会更色气一些?🤔那种被迫偷情但是又要忍住不能发出声音的样子太色了🤩

亞絲娜醬

English people, can we please get a translated version!!

Kiritooow

please fertilize her eggs and knock her up

A-kun

希望鬼鳴老師能夠釋出無碼版本?!

LIU

果然最後還是可憐的西田WWW

nello

总有一天 我希望你能学会日语,并出版翻译版本><;。

Σ バタコ。

非常棒,太棒了!!!!!神中神啊

brove2

Did he add a new panel 🧐🤔

mmm

amazing ❤️

sao_chan

做完春夢,直接找本人開幹

Jay

Love your Asuna work. hope you continue to do more of this in the future

aznpat

做梦这个结局,说明后续还有别的发展空间

Hudiy

the betrayal....awesome art sensei

legendkun2

亚总赛高

jackqiu

LOL

Ginger Soul

老師畫的亞絲娜還是一樣棒

血色蒼月

オチが最高👍

カイジ

還是夢啊

Gray

西田做的梦中梦🤣

亞絲娜醬

Please make them kiss again sensei

Ancestorm

Please some more blowjob Sensei 😍😍

Reinaldo Alves

Legend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

legendkun2

Your Asuna work is Always perfect

Ekidastre

More creampie sensei😍😍

EMT

都破了,有無限開火權了吧 !

堀江 長月

彩圖太色了🤤

LaSaMeYa

老师,来个口交清洁结尾把!

零也不过是夜

向老師許願 希望能看到學生服被掀上 胸部半露的亞斯娜續幹 (前半部做夢階段 胸罩被拉開 乳交的畫面讚 尤其說在上廁所 側拍那畫面真的超棒)

yourvampire

I like where this is going..thanks sensei!!!!!!

legendkun2

.

mmm

Has the conversation disappeared?

UU_quleurer

看样子是直接把套子干破了,狠狠地播种😏

flymoody

看來西田先生又要調皮了 我整個硬爆

暗影君王

老师,这火啊

legendkun2

水手服无敌🌶️🥵🥵🥵

千纺

確實劇情在h漫裡也是重要的一部份,短漫也有自己的魅力,主打就是一個快節奏

Jay

It’s ok thanks anyways!

mmm

I have tried some applications that translate images, but I have not found any that do it well. I usually wait for it to be translated.

Dystopian boy

Sorry bro I don't speak Chinese, I have to use the translator xD But I think it is a fairly correct translation. Basically he is giving us to understand that everything is a little confusing and rushed for a reason that will be revealed at the end of the story. It occurs to me that in the end it will all be a dream and I will still be lying on the bathroom floor or something like that.

Dystopian boy

translate app

c28

you mean it's not over yet? nice nice

ジェラルド 2

At the end of the other one, she successfully tricked him into thinking it was a dream. BUT, she forgot one piece of evidence: THE CONDOMS. She goes to find them before he does, and the rest is ^

Ginger Soul

以老師的”壞習慣” 我猜結局不管怎麼樣,應該多少有搞笑的成分在🤣

LaSaMeYa

English fans, how do y'all translate to a point where u understand the story :sob:

Kiritooow

I think the google translate I want actual translation. XD

mmm

老師一生推!!!!

K3

Thank you all for your support and messages Although I really want to tell the ending directly...but please wait for me. I can only say Everyone who left the message in English and Chinese is right...0V0

Dystopian boy

Can someone translate what message the author left thank you!🙏

mmm

理智但逐漸沉淪,說得太好了💪

K3

老師這張水手服亞絲娜雙腿被掰開太色了! 如果亞絲娜能自己扛著一隻腳或雙腿更色⋯ 蠻喜歡看到NTR作品中女角理智存在但身體逐漸沈淪的樣子😆

LaSaMeYa

这种既不情愿又期待的表情非常精彩!

ゴーシン

那些英文組的不要破壞老師心情,有亞絲娜就是棒!!!🤤

DK

認同!澀還要更澀!

LaSaMeYa

在同人世界裡就是追求喜歡的角色能夠創造出更多的可能🤤

LaSaMeYa

在同人作品裡尋求的就是一種不可能或是與現實相反的願望

Jay

他们还探讨上剧情合不合理了,够涩不就好了🤣

亞絲娜醬

把A漫當柯南在看

Gray

他們似乎想在2次元中追求什麼正常邏輯⋯ 笑死🤣

LaSaMeYa

同意

亞絲娜醬

Love the call back in this recent panel

Ginger Soul

Yes, it feels a little confusing.

Dystopian boy

Klein's story was the first I saw of him, but the truth is that this story seems hotter to me.

Dystopian boy

I've already seen it, but why did Asuna go in the middle of the night to look for some condoms? I was saying this in case anyone knows what they are talking about in the first pages.

Dystopian boy

這群英文留言也太沒禮貌了吧

laframee

agreed. I only started supporting because I thought it may be Klein

c28

I like this a lot, but i believe that what most of us are waiting is continuation for Asuna-Klein content; is one of the best ever done in my opinion.

FrogMan

老師終於把水手服畫上去了! 可喜可賀😆

LaSaMeYa

https://ddks2923.fanbox.cc/posts/5211238 you’ll know when you see it

Gray

Like I say so far story has been really confusing i dare say almost nonsensical

mmm

Does anyone know why Asuna was looking for the condoms in the first place?

Dystopian boy

no spread pussy amd licking pussy this time?

ジェラルド 2

大战三百回合!

黄小鲤

在射10發

Jay

水手服🤤🤤,西田大喜。老二力量瞬間提升至人生新高。

K3

亚丝娜和西田有没有机会对着桐亚结婚照做,感觉应该很刺激:-D

asuna

水手服好诶,我看见亚丝娜穿水手服时的表情跟西田大叔一模一样(*´I`*)

亞絲娜醬

謝謝老師 竟然真的有水手服(淚目)

yourvampire

水手服再战一回!

flymoody

高潮脸好涩哦,感觉亚丝娜已经快要被西田的肉棒征服了,下一步是不是可以开始调教了0v0

亞絲娜醬

现在已经是第三部了,可以去看第二部里的亚丝娜就是不太情愿但是又不好意思拒绝才答应跟西田做…… 而且还被西田偷袭内设,结果西田内设完太爽直接昏迷了,亚丝娜趁他昏迷给他把衣服穿回去假装不知道她们两个做过,西田也以为自己在做梦,然后亚丝娜送走西田结果桐人又把他带回来了…之前跟西田做的时候没用完的套被亚丝娜藏在沙发下面,让西田发现了所以亚丝娜知道瞒不住只能再一次跟西田做。 从西田把套放在亚丝娜面前的时候亚丝娜那个眼神盯着套子微微皱眉像是在说:“这件事情瞒不住了,不想让桐人知道只能再跟他做了”,我觉得鬼鸣老师把这个眼神画得很生动形象(ps也有可能是我自己过渡解读了哈哈哈) 总之结合起来我觉得第三部亚丝娜妹妹的表现很合理,第二部跟第三部连起来看真的很不错可以去看一下🤤

亞絲娜醬

太主动了,更不情愿一点比较合理

465ddd

清潔表情好正🤤希望可以清耐d🤪

K3

Sheesh she’s giving him the whole enchilada lol

mmm

subo tite!

ジェラルド 2

How do y'all translate/understand it?

Kiritooow

Seriously, not the Klein continuation? That's not what I paid for

c28

Raw sex sensei!!!

legendkun2

Nicee senseii😍😍

EMT

i wish i was nishida

ジェラルド 2

Yes, I agree with that, hence my first comment. But well, we'll see how it progresses, if this story continues. Or if he starts something else. But the story with the old man is especially hot.

Dystopian boy

Yea you’re right it might just might be a continuation but if it was I still wish he would of had a couple pages of asuna hesitating and the old man pushing her instead of just straight fucking feel like the dialogue along with the art always makes the story the most exciting and the story in this has a lot of loose ends. Asuna begrudgingly fucking with a little angry face is what always makes asuna ntr hot imo but he kinda doesn’t do that here.

mmm

You're right, we'll see how it progresses. Maybe everything goes faster because it is a continuation and he considers that the development is enough. In any case I love his art.

Dystopian boy

To be fair we still have no idea what this story is gonna end like it might still be a dream I feel that might be the twist considering the story feels kinda rushed and unrealistic so far I might be wrong though.

mmm

Especially considering that Kirito is at home. And the previous part ended with the old man cumming without a condom.

Dystopian boy

I agree with asuna being predisposed feels like there was no push back felt a bit rushed.

mmm

The sex scenes are incredible, but isn't Asuna too predisposed? I miss some scenes before and after sex. Still, incredible work.

Dystopian boy

😳

mmm

次は直葉をお願いします!🙇

カイジ

nice !!!!!!!!!!

UU_quleurer

西田偷偷的没有带套做会更好

衣浩 崔

That would be so damn funny

Ginger Soul

It would be cool if Kirito showed up completely drunk but joined in the game making DP in her and then didn't remember anything the next day

JePreto

如果能看到西田用跳蛋当桐姥爷面偷偷调教亚丝娜,嘶~我都不敢想象多精彩

Hudiy

最愛的劇情來了,太感動了,老師!

DK

老师终于开始画亚丝娜,特来支持🤤

909524140

请多制作亚丝娜 x 西田 老师

legendkun2

👍

mmm

老师画的亚丝娜真的好可爱🤤

亞絲娜醬

本月不再更新? 本月已完成或...><;

Σ バタコ。

👍

mmm

hmm 🤔 but when nishida goes to CR asuna saw him then nishida beg to have sex the place where they'll fck was on living room then after that when asuna waking up nishida they're in the CR again. that's why i think that's it's a dream and there's a scene asuna touching her self that's why she got wet. but you might be right since there a part where nishida said why he feels so relieved so yea maybe he didn't remember what happened but asuna did 😂

ジェラルド 2

very cool

ジェラルド 2

老師賽高!可以考慮加入anal調教嗎?全開的asuna一定超色🤤😍

Sijun Li

The previous one isn't a dream, he just faints at the end and she pretends nothing happened.

Ginger Soul

Holy shit, this is wild.

Ginger Soul

Kiss scene sensei

EMT

🤌

mmm

New scene ☺️

mmm

hope to see more. so excited!

Bob

老師上次有說 原本想讓她穿學生服的 (能不能用這個理由:不想弄髒這套睡衣 剛好其他衣服都拿去洗了 只好勉為其難換上制服)

yourvampire

西田的龜頭是不是變小了?是太多次的關係嗎?

keith_cbx

來了來了來了

nello

必須300回合

Jay

西田好緊火😂🤤

K3

一言不合就開幹😆

LaSaMeYa

Woooooo!

General Lee

This story is kinda confusing I feel like it’s skipping parts still good ntr though.

mmm

我觉得是上一次西田用过的套套 所以上一次大概不是西田的梦 是确实做了

黄小鲤

應該是真的在找套子 上一集有拿出來一盒出來,可能來不及歸位就藏在沙發底下了😆

LaSaMeYa

Lmao I wouldn’t be surprised if he somehow wakes up knocked out on the floor at the end xD

mmm

hmm. so the previous one is a dream including the tit fuck scene here. so what's going to happen next is not a dream anymore 😏

ジェラルド 2

上面寫數字0.0應該是套子沒錯

Ggww

Condoms it looks like

mmm

好好奇亞絲娜在找什麼東西?? 不知道是不是最後笑點的伏筆😆

LaSaMeYa

Yea

mmm

Condom...I think

JePreto

讓我猜猜是個跳蛋

Jay

What is he holding?🤔

mmm

!

mmm

🫡

mmm

:3

mmm

老师!!!!太棒了!!!

零也不过是夜

拜託西田做個好夢 夢多一點

Jay

Beautiful!

mmm

更新!

Σ バタコ。

more👍

SP

今年度的最新力作,猛的程度堪比沙丘2🤤

LaSaMeYa

無敵

Jay

西田編の続き助かる

やっくん

HERE WE GO

Ginger Soul

👍

mmm

Yes!!!

AceZx9

AHA! So this is a continuation

General Lee

Finally😍😍

EMT

等了好久终于等到今天

黄小鲤

最高...

CHELLYU

水餒

Gray

西田編の続き!

Σ バタコ。

終於來了🤤

K3


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