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Red riding in the hood brainstorming

Here is the process I used for writing my red riding IN the HOOD comic, enjoy :)

Red riding IN THE HOOD comic


She is a gangster, Hood usually has gang violence? Someone dying perhaps? From a gun shot? Gun shot wound.. her commenting on gun shot wound size? (good follow up from todays comic) 


Two routes


Sad route - angry route


- Sad route - My oh my grandma, what big bullet wounds you have - standing in front of grave - Single panel


Angry route - 4 panel


Enters house - Wolf greets her - she pulls out gun - "My oh My grandma what big bullet wounds you have - could have this as bonus. could just have her walking in and commenting on the fact that shes a wolf with gun pointed at her...



Final script


Frame 1 - Enters home


Frame 2 - Hello sweetie you look Love.. - gets cut off-


Frame 3 - gun on wolf - wolf looking frightened


Frame 4 - Riding hood with lowkey lighting - "N*gga you a Wolf*


Bonus ending instead of bonus panel can be secondary ending


May switch around.. pending moderator 


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